he loves me,
he loves me not.
he does not love me but has me caught.
trapped me in a photo conversation to make me admit my love,
but i cling to my pride like the dingy on the ocean above.
why would i ever have feelings for a boy with such charm?
whos glittery green eyes sparkle with no harm.
whos skin is fair and porcelain smooth,
and his hair that waves up and down like the ocean groove.
his intelligence and will that trapped me in a daze,
this is true feelings, not no childish phase.
but he acts so different around me yet claims to only be friends,
cutting off my feelings like old split ends.
but everyone says there is hope and possible heart,
but my hope and my mind is tearing me apart.
he loves me, he loves me not.
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Author:
elmiina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 11th, 2019 00:07
- Comment from author about the poem: feelings are confusing and hard to read.
- Category: Love
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Really nice write..that I am sure alot of people can relate too. Thanks for sharing 🙂
HI ELMINA : ANGELA HERE ! First let me thank you for the lovely dynamic Poem on SPRING : You added to our Fusion : BRIAN is my Fiancee in the UK : Im in New Zealand on a work exchange until OCTOBER 2019 : we are getting married in 2020 ! At the moment we are supporting & praying for CHRISTCHURCH after the massacare !
Thanks for this poem : Im 30 and I can empathise in relation to BOYS who loved me & loved me not ! When ladies are in LOVE we say so and want the World to know it. In my expereience most Men react differently ! The love you and crave your affection but (especially with their mates !) they act cool and pretend you're just GOOD FRIENDS etc : this leaves us uncertain & in limbo ! My MUM told me "Men are scared of commitment". Things are different with BRIAN (35) who had had his ups & downs in Love. We have a lot in common : have found true love and both sets of praents are very HAPPY : what more could an engaged couple want ?
I hope you find you SOUL MATE very soon !
BLESSINGS & JOY ANGELA 🧡
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