Crystal Hope

Enliven in me

Take my ocean's tears.
Mend my broken mountains.
Start my body's gears.
Water my spirit's fountain.

Answer my echo's cries.
Call my heart's ambition.
Color my faded skies.
Lead me to my next mission.

Enliven my brightest light.
Guide me to a clear navigation.
Discover a star in the darkest night
unraveling love to a damaged nation. 


  • Nicholas Browning

    How nice it would be if that could be so. I enjoyed the read!

  • Goldfinch60

    May all your words come true. Good write.

  • orchidee

    Yep, we all could all do with some enlivening at times. OK, I won't sing. That will un-enliven anyone! heehee.

  • ForeverJesus6

    This was a very nice piece. It sounds almost as though it would be a psalm. I particularly enjoyed the last two lines.
    Jesus is the healing of all nations.
    Keep writing.
    Persistence is key

    • Crystal Hope

      I kinda wrote it like that. glad you enjoyed. :)

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