A tepid tear thronged tidily
down her crimson colored cheek.
A promising past plunged down
to a future profoundly bleak.
Heated hands held together
sweating stressful strain of its own.
Whipping words withered from her mouth
to her marvelous Master,"I'm tired of being alone."
Calmly cupping her clinched chin,
He swept back the stinging sobs off her flushed face.
He smiled suavely with tender truth
as she entered into a reassuring place.
He sat her beside on His tall throne
telling her what was willingly written.
He held her hurting head and said
"Everything you've ever done is forgiven.i
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Author:
Crystal (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 14th, 2019 15:49
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments5
Nice bit of enthralling darkness. I enjoyed the read. It's quite catchy.
thanks
I hope you continue to write. I enjoy reading your work. You have a very nice and unique style of poetry.
Persistence is key
awe thank you. I have a lot of poems. I just come on here and post when i cam.
Very good write with a wonderful positive ending.
Thank You!
Oh dear, it all reads in Greek to me! I will have to translate it. lol.
😀
What an ending! Hooked all the way through, much appreciated thank you!
thanks for the comment! 🙂
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