Forgiven

Crystal Hope

A tepid tear thronged tidily
down her crimson colored cheek.
A promising past plunged down
to a future profoundly bleak.

Heated hands held together
sweating stressful strain of its own.
Whipping words withered from her mouth
to her marvelous Master,"I'm tired of being alone."

Calmly cupping her clinched chin,
He swept back the stinging sobs off her flushed face.
He smiled suavely with tender truth
as she entered into a reassuring place.

He sat her beside on His tall throne
telling her what was willingly written.
He held her hurting head and said
"Everything you've ever done is forgiven.i

  • Author: Crystal (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 14th, 2019 15:49
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments5

  • Nicholas Browning

    Nice bit of enthralling darkness. I enjoyed the read. It's quite catchy.

  • ForeverJesus7

    I hope you continue to write. I enjoy reading your work. You have a very nice and unique style of poetry.
    Persistence is key

    • Crystal Hope

      awe thank you. I have a lot of poems. I just come on here and post when i cam.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write with a wonderful positive ending.

    • orchidee

      Oh dear, it all reads in Greek to me! I will have to translate it. lol.

    • Poetic Dan

      What an ending! Hooked all the way through, much appreciated thank you!

      • Crystal Hope

        thanks for the comment! 🙂



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