Poetic Dan

Good artists copy; great artist steal



Baby sit on back and relax
Swing those little feet round in your sack
Ready to go nowhere fast

 

Who knows where life is ment to lead
I've got nothing but time
I'll wait to show you the world
It'll be just fine

 

I didn't mean to be so hesitant
It hurt the first couple of times
Now you've gone picking us
Our little dragonfly

 

For what will be
Is gonna be
We're just here to please

 

Ready to, smile with you
Laugh with you
Play it all day long

 

Waiting to, dance with you
Singing with you
Hugging all night long

 

Right now you're the size of a mouse
You're just learning about a frown
Soon ready to take in sound

 

I'll start reading this one aloud
Hoping you'll spin real fast
Working those muscles hard
Ready for the breath of life

 

As what will be
Is gonna be
Nothing can go wrong

 

Knowing we
Will always be
In each other hearts

 

Endlessly
In a sea
Floating
On
&
On

Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful write may you go on to eternity.

    • Poetic Dan

      Helping with the pain, thank you my friend. I'm be seeing you there!

    • orchidee

      You floating? Good write Dan.!

      • Poetic Dan

        Maybe must be all this co-codamol lol

      • Nicholas Browning

        Clever. I see what you did there. It's not theft you know if you don't actually steal anything!
        Best regards, Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          True, but it's all stolen and on repeat just with a little twist or maybe I'm just losing it!
          Appreciate the regards ;)

        • FineB

          Hello Poetic Dan,

          A super write.

          Keep writing FineB

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you kindly
            That I will
            Appreciate your words

          • Diamond

            Very beautiful, Dan. Gives a warm feeling.

            • Poetic Dan

              I'm glad, must be the new life coming as I'm slowly feeling reborn too ;)

            • Maxine Smith

              This is such a lovely read Dan. Enjoyed it very much.

              • Poetic Dan

                Always appreciated

              • Christina8

                I do enjoy that song! Wonderful write too!

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you
                  Always appreciated



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