Those moments when you could just disappear
Feeling in each word you're creating a tenser atmospherese
Loneliness is a place where signpost are gone
When both happiness and sadness are alone as one
This energy and vibration wants to have no ripple
It begins to put up walls around the inner temple
Tit for tat, who does this who does that
Nothing to say with the drawbridge up
Lets just survive within what we have got
If only I was more forgiving I'd not have to write this one
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hoping to get out of my way!
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Dan,
Please “get out of” your own “way”!
It will be worthwhile! Believe me!
I’ve been there and done that! After many years, I’ve seen the value of getting ‘out of my way’! The benefits are immeasurable!
As difficult as it can be sometimes, be
strong as I know you can be!
~Laura~
Reading your words today after getting out my way have made me feel you were the wind in my sail.
Thank you Endlessly
I know that feeling and am still working on it.
Forgiveness begins with ourselves 🌈
You was the shadow I saw, thank you for showing your rainbow.
The gold was in your words
Much love and respect
Thanks dan and right back atcha!
😊😊😊
Sounds like a bit of a rough patch.
Best regards, Dan!
That it was my friend, but when the road get rough our writings try to free us!
Really appreciate the regards
To continue my efforts
You have been coming forward in your life in a good way, this is just a blip which you will move aside and then press on towards the beauty of life.
Ha, how true are your words my good friend.
Much peace and respect
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