Where's the off switch

Poetic Dan

Those moments when you could just disappear
Feeling in each word you're creating a tenser atmospherese

 

Loneliness is a place where signpost are gone
When both happiness and sadness are alone as one

 

This energy and vibration wants to have no ripple
It begins to put up walls around the inner temple

 

Tit for tat, who does this who does that
Nothing to say with the drawbridge up

 

Lets just survive within what we have got
If only I was more forgiving I'd not have to write this one

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 25th, 2019 10:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hoping to get out of my way!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, arazimus
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  • Laura🌻

    Dan,

    Please “get out of” your own “way”!
    It will be worthwhile! Believe me!
    I’ve been there and done that! After many years, I’ve seen the value of getting ‘out of my way’! The benefits are immeasurable!
    As difficult as it can be sometimes, be
    strong as I know you can be!

    ~Laura~

    • Poetic Dan

      Reading your words today after getting out my way have made me feel you were the wind in my sail.
      Thank you Endlessly

    • sylviasearcher

      I know that feeling and am still working on it.
      Forgiveness begins with ourselves 🌈

      • Poetic Dan

        You was the shadow I saw, thank you for showing your rainbow.
        The gold was in your words
        Much love and respect

        • sylviasearcher

          Thanks dan and right back atcha!
          😊😊😊

        • Nicholas Browning

          Sounds like a bit of a rough patch.
          Best regards, Dan!

          • Poetic Dan

            That it was my friend, but when the road get rough our writings try to free us!
            Really appreciate the regards
            To continue my efforts

          • Goldfinch60

            You have been coming forward in your life in a good way, this is just a blip which you will move aside and then press on towards the beauty of life.

            • Poetic Dan

              Ha, how true are your words my good friend.
              Much peace and respect



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