I've got out of my way
Saying what I had to say
Finding forgiveness
Telling my weakness
Within this realm
Holding what fell
Yesterday is now gone
Like the stitches in my nose
Healing takes its own road
Better when you're not alone
Not being the only eyes
Looking up to harmonize
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Poetic Dan (
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A fine write Dan.
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
Nicely expressed. Dan, and good to read you again. I've read most of your wonderfully skilled written and I adore you for giving me that. Sometimes in life most things get in the way, and sometimes it's good to move out of your own way first to allow access for the things we can't see coming or happening towards ourselves. You pitched this meaning perfectly. Love it. and you, too.
Wow, thank you for the generous comments. I still remember the first wonderful work I read of yours my friend, you said something that told me I've got so much to grow, like a flower or a stem to see a better world.
I'm now going to try and find that again, it's been a wonderful journey be inspired by so many.
Then allow the flame to flicker on, and let your flower bloom in and around your own world. You have a fantastic, and intellectual mind which will only ever brighten your darker days up. The inspiration from others is a beautiful thing, but please remember the real inspiration is let loose from within your own diamond of a heart. Stick to your rules and routine of daily life and just watch how the creation of your life explodes.
Eye captain full steam ahead! Your choice of words are still hard to hear like it just can't be me but I'll sort out my insecurities, thanks for the trigger 😉
May that harmony be always with you Dan.
From the rivers to the sea, we know where it'll be 😉
Somewhere in between, inspiring from you to me
Thanks for that thought!
You fell in among poets and you gave us the real you. In return you saw us occasionally showing you bits of us. You took those pieces, bit by bit, and made a wisdom of them. The wisdom you created has led you along a path of self healing.
And look at you enjoying things now. Where once these things brought you sadness and to self doubt, now you rejoice in the love of them and the love which surrounds you.
Great to read.
Everytime I read your words it is like you know of all the thoughts that go behind my words.
You are an amazing soul like many I've met on here, you'll never going to be forgot I feel like I've sowed you all in to my soul.
Now happy to just be me along the dusty road, thank you for always keeping the spirits up!
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