Short & neat

Poetic Dan

Negative or positive it's my grains of sand
Heating it all up with every stride or stance
Till I become lucidly echoing my past.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 28th, 2019 03:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Really enjoyed this one, again inspired by other poets, and our comments!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 21
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  • orchidee

    Oohh, you don't have to permanently rely on us others. You can be unique, special in yourself, etc - indeed as you do and are.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you kindly

    • Neville

      Like it... I like it a whole lot... I do... N

      • Poetic Dan

        Ha, i was going to title it that lol
        Cheers buddy that really made me chuckle 😉

        • Neville

          my pleasure....

        • Fay Slimm.

          Both quote and words leave the right vibes on choice - a lucid write - thanks Dan.

          • Poetic Dan

            Wonderfully said, thank you my dear!

          • Goldfinch60

            Good one Dan.

          • sylviasearcher

            Kind of echoing Keats there my friend!
            😊

            • Poetic Dan

              Always appreciated, thank you



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