God called you home during the night
Before you left you put up a real good fight
You fought long and hard, you did your best
No more pain, your soul is at rest
You sit next to your creator, looking upon the world
Watching over your grandchildren and your girls
We are sad and miss you everyday
Your soul and spirit are free, as I pray
God called you home, during the night
Even after you left us your spirit fights
We will be together again one day
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Thanks for sharing TERESA a very moving Poem. We can have hope of future GLORY when People die who have acknowledged GOD in their Lives ~ AMEN. Love the structure ~ Good rhythm (meter) and five rhyming couplets ~ and a Closing Line (11) which you have rhymed with Line (8) ~ excellent ! Love the content too ~ thanks for caring & sharing ! I would mark the POEM an A !
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Thank you for your kind words as always Brian.
This was a very nice piece. It is very well put together, and a nice tribute.
Persistence is key
thank you
Wonderful write, yes they will be together again one day but your friend's mother will always be with them.
thank you
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