Fay Slimm




Love's Tune.


Love, blind to weakness
sees only the perfect
    but eyes can change image     
then battle rules.


We, who we are believe
harmony's discord
yet love's tune composes
more than music.


  • Poetic Dan

    That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it's done.

  • orchidee

    A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum's Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?

  • dusk arising

    Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
    I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
    The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
    Goes into my favs.

  • Neville

    What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville

    • Fay Slimm

      Thanking you kindly dear Sir............. glad you felt it was not too short.

      • Neville

        I thought it was luverly... No kiddin... And anyway.. a little reassurance can be spread a very long way Fay... thank you again.. Neville

      • 3 more comments

      • Laura

        My dear Fay,

        A stunning write!
        Thank you for sharing!


        • Fay Slimm

          My pleasure dear Laura is to know you enjoyed the read. Thank you for the lovely comment.

        • Joker Green

          Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
          The picture adds beauty.

          With Love and Laughter,

          • Fay Slimm

            How kind of you to say so and I thank you sincerely. Love and Laughter to you too friend.

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            💖 it! Fay
            love the art picture too.....
            Have a Blessed Sunday dear lady!

            • Fay Slimm

              Bless you for noticing the graphic Claudella - I thought it apt to highlight the reference to love's music - - - Thank you for your visit and comment.

            • Joe Dawson

              A mother's love, forgives everything - mine certainly did. Lovely work. Joe

              • Fay Slimm

                Ah- tis true Joe that a mother who forgives and whose love supports deserves a day of special celebration - -- so pleased you enjoyed the read.

              • Goldfinch60

                So very true Fay, love is wonderful.

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