Fay Slimm.



Love's Tune.


Love, blind to weakness
sees only the perfect
    but eyes can change image     
then battle rules.


We, who we are believe
harmony's discord
yet love's tune composes
more than music.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 31st, 2019 03:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Posted on Mother Day for suffering relationships. Hope you enjoy.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 49
  • Users favorite of this poem: dusk arising, LaurašŸŒ».


  • Poetic Dan

    That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it's done.

  • orchidee

    A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum's Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?

  • dusk arising

    Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
    I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
    The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
    Goes into my favs.

  • Neville

    What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thanking you kindly dear Sir............. glad you felt it was not too short.

      • Neville

        I thought it was luverly... No kiddin... And anyway.. a little reassurance can be spread a very long way Fay... thank you again.. Neville

      • 3 more comments

      • LaurašŸŒ»

        My dear Fay,

        A stunning write!
        Thank you for sharing!


        • Fay Slimm.

          My pleasure dear Laura is to know you enjoyed the read. Thank you for the lovely comment.

        • Nafis Light

          Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
          The picture adds beauty.

          With Love and Laughter,

          • Fay Slimm.

            How kind of you to say so and I thank you sincerely. Love and Laughter to you too friend.

          • Goldfinch60

            So very true Fay, love is wonderful.

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