LOVE'S TUNE.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Love's Tune.

 

Love, blind to weakness
sees only the perfect
    but eyes can change image     
then battle rules.

 

We, who we are believe
harmony's discord
yet love's tune composes
more than music.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 31st, 2019 03:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Posted on Mother Day for suffering relationships. Hope you enjoy.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 49
  • Users favorite of this poem: dusk arising, Laura🌻
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  • Poetic Dan

    That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it's done.

  • orchidee

    A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum's Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?

  • dusk arising

    Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
    I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
    The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
    Goes into my favs.

  • Neville

    What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thanking you kindly dear Sir............. glad you felt it was not too short.

      • Neville

        I thought it was luverly... No kiddin... And anyway.. a little reassurance can be spread a very long way Fay... thank you again.. Neville

        • Fay Slimm.

          Re my short posting - - Yes now you remind me just a few lines do go a long way when someone needs reassurance - thanks for that thought Nev.my luverly friend.

          • Neville

            always a pleasure Fay.....

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              When you are in LOVE
              The whole World singa a melody
              When you are in LOVE
              Who cares if raindrops fall ?

              Thanks FAY : for sharing a Love Poem !
              As far as BRIAN is concerned : I see only strengths
              For us the melody of Love is always harmonious !
              Blessings & Love
              Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
              Please check our FUSION on COLOURS : tHANKS

            • Laura🌻

              My dear Fay,

              A stunning write!
              Thank you for sharing!

              ~Laura~

              • Fay Slimm.

                My pleasure dear Laura is to know you enjoyed the read. Thank you for the lovely comment.

              • Nafis Light

                Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
                The picture adds beauty.

                With Love and Laughter,
                J44

                • Fay Slimm.

                  How kind of you to say so and I thank you sincerely. Love and Laughter to you too friend.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So very true Fay, love is wonderful.



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