Poetic Dan

Sometimes I forget



Just when you think you couldn't love and adore her any more

She goes and grows a child tightly to her core

 

Laying in bed hearing her creep for a pee late

Knowing that what's inside her is our mixed up dna

 

The short little naps to rest her aching back

The mind thats started losing track of this and that

That beautiful little glow that's loving lifes flow 

I've never felt so grateful for not being shown the door

 

I should tell her this more often, how special she really is. 

For seeing past my tissue, when I can't see myself

When Sprinklings turns to waterfalls, mood swings out of this world

 

Silly me of course she knows how amazing she is, anyone else would put me back on shelf. 

 

 

 

 

Comments11

  • orchidee

    A lovely Mothers Day write Dan. Now can ya help with my singing? People hear it, then put me back on the shelf. Doh! lol.

    • Poetic Dan

      As long as your name is not Sue! I'm sure you just need to get fido on with you.

    • Laura

      Dan,

      Awesome poem...
      Awesome author comments!
      Of course I totally agree with your message! So happy you’ve found your niche and are appreciating it! Life is amazing...isn’t it?! Have a great Sunday!

      ~Laura~

      • Poetic Dan

        That it is beautiful and raw, dark and light.
        So much better in a blister and broety life
        Where all doors are open and no one has to hide

        Happy Sunday to you my inspirational muse
        I think that's another one I'll copy play with too ;)

        • Laura

          Btw...
          Love Dion’s song! He’s one of my faves! Just finished listening to “Runaround Sue” for the third time...thanks to you! The last time I saw him perform, he was in great form!

          Love 💖 your comment!
          I guess we’re now officially the ...
          “blister ‘n broety” duo!
          I like that!

        • 2 more comments

        • Poetic Dan

          This song was just chosen after reading goldfinch post today!
          Did make me giggle....

          • Laura

            Ah, yes!
            I thought it was just a coincidence and that you just liked the name Sue!😉
            Personally, I like Dion’s songs! I lived in his neighborhood at a young age! When my aunt visits the church he and his family attended, it makes me think of him...and of course, there’s always the Italian connection!😊

          • Fay Slimm

            A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life dear Dan - - have s great Sunday with hugs - - xx from Fay

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you kindly, have a wonderful sunny Sunday too.
              Much love and respect xx

            • dusk arising

              There's love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
              Difficult times of disturbed nights, bleary eyed mornings, screaming/wailing baby and extra chores can cloud the love between two people.
              But those quiet together times are still there to share the glow of a successful loving pairing.

              You lucky people.

              • Poetic Dan

                Wow just when I think You can't get any better, you have such a way with words. I swear if I wasn't so madly in love, I'd be writing you a verse.... Ha ha sorry couldn't help it!

                Always appreciated good sir!

              • LittleGift

                Absolutely loved the message in this piece Dan. And the pic too. You see love for all it’s entirety. It’s not all chocolates and roses. It’s more having someone love you even with what you believe are flaws. And loving them in return, makes for an everlasting companionship. May you both continue to feel that love, for many years to come

                • Poetic Dan

                  Yeah, I ate the chocolates and left the roses where they are ;)
                  I may of started that vibration off but I could definitely hear another little voice, I'm sure that's your everlasting just around the corner!

                  Always appreciated
                  Glad you liked it

                • Claudelle DeLuna

                  Excellent poem! Dan
                  This amazing words could have only come out of someone with a deep soul like YOU, may you continue to be blessed & your loved ones too!
                  Have a Great Sunday my friend!
                  😊✌

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Ah! Bless you that is very kind and must only be the reflection of the wonderful soul you are.
                    Have a tea-rrific day!

                    Much peace and love
                    Your way!

                  • Joe Dawson

                    Very nice work, touching to a fault. I found my world too and it just happens to be the piano and we've had a baby grand ... Super job. Joe

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Ha ha brilliant I look forward to hearing you and your baby!
                      Much appreciated

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Your life has moved on into a wonderful place Dan, well done.

                      • Poetic Dan

                        Move on up!
                        That song just came on
                        Always appreciate your awesome vibe!

                      • Jeffrey Roy

                        Very nice poem !! Thank you for sharing.

                        • Poetic Dan

                          Thank you for reading
                          Much peace and respect

                        • sylviasearcher

                          Heartfelt, you are both very lucky 🥰

                          • Poetic Dan

                            Thank you kindly!



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