Just when you think you couldn't love and adore her any more
She goes and grows a child tightly to her core
Laying in bed hearing her creep for a pee late
Knowing that what's inside her is our mixed up dna
The short little naps to rest her aching back
The mind thats started losing track of this and that
That beautiful little glow that's loving lifes flow
I've never felt so grateful for not being shown the door
I should tell her this more often, how special she really is.
For seeing past my tissue, when I can't see myself
When Sprinklings turns to waterfalls, mood swings out of this world
Silly me of course she knows how amazing she is, anyone else would put me back on shelf.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'm lucky to of been in love a few times now, each one helped unclip my wings until I found it in myself. In my opinion the better the man is because he has listened to the grace of a woman. With the more forgiving a lady's heart is when no male overstepped the boundaries And the more trusting a males hand, if love is not abandoned. Never give up, keep walking this land. All things come back, you just have to ask!
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A lovely Mothers Day write Dan. Now can ya help with my singing? People hear it, then put me back on the shelf. Doh! lol.
As long as your name is not Sue! I'm sure you just need to get fido on with you.
Dan,
Awesome poem...
Awesome author comments!
Of course I totally agree with your message! So happy youāve found your niche and are appreciating it! Life is amazing...isnāt it?! Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
That it is beautiful and raw, dark and light.
So much better in a blister and broety life
Where all doors are open and no one has to hide
Happy Sunday to you my inspirational muse
I think that's another one I'll copy play with too š
Btw...
Love Dionās song! Heās one of my faves! Just finished listening to āRunaround Sueā for the third time...thanks to you! The last time I saw him perform, he was in great form!
Love š your comment!
I guess weāre now officially the ...
āblister ān broetyā duo!
I like that!
Brilliant and that came because of others, the ripples just go on and on. A bit like sue but not me and you, just here duo in a rhyme or two!
Awesome š
Happy Motherās Day š
to the mother/s of your children!
This song was just chosen after reading goldfinch post today!
Did make me giggle....
Ah, yes!
I thought it was just a coincidence and that you just liked the name Sue!š
Personally, I like Dionās songs! I lived in his neighborhood at a young age! When my aunt visits the church he and his family attended, it makes me think of him...and of course, thereās always the Italian connection!š
A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life dear Dan - - have s great Sunday with hugs - - xx from Fay
Thank you kindly, have a wonderful sunny Sunday too.
Much love and respect xx
There's love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
Difficult times of disturbed nights, bleary eyed mornings, screaming/wailing baby and extra chores can cloud the love between two people.
But those quiet together times are still there to share the glow of a successful loving pairing.
You lucky people.
Wow just when I think You can't get any better, you have such a way with words. I swear if I wasn't so madly in love, I'd be writing you a verse.... Ha ha sorry couldn't help it!
Always appreciated good sir!
Your life has moved on into a wonderful place Dan, well done.
Move on up!
That song just came on
Always appreciate your awesome vibe!
Very nice poem !! Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for reading
Much peace and respect
Heartfelt, you are both very lucky š„°
Thank you kindly!
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