A Thirst Well Quenched

Neville

A Thirst Well Quenched

 

A thirst

Well quenched

A sorrow drowned

When the words I seek

Go round and round and round

 

When silence

Say’s it louder than

Any other shouted sound

I don’t want to say I love you

But something else far more profound

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 1st, 2019 02:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: When simple words are not enough, reach for the thesaurus ....
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 69
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., whisperingquill, SerenWise
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  • orchidee

    A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - 'When at first you don't succeed, give up!' Subtitled 'Ain't no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!' lol.
    A pessimistic start to the week from me!

    • Neville

      Try to look on the bright side of pessimism and you might just be blinded by the light thrown on your day ahead.... in the meantime... thank you for checking through my spelling... Neville

      • orchidee

        You had that drink yet? Summat about being thirsty?!

        • Neville

          my needs are met... cheers..

          • orchidee

            You done that gardening?!

            • Neville

              No but my needs are still met.... as will my weeds be once I have done that gardening..

            • Fay Slimm.

              A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.

              • Neville

                Many thanks Fay.. another welcome visit and of course appreciated too... Neville

              • dusk arising

                A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
                "You say it loudest when you say nothing at all".
                Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.

                • Neville

                  Thank you DA... the trick is to avoid mixing...

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.

                  • Neville

                    Cor blimey Fay.. I am more than honoured.. much more than.. I can tell ya.... x

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      My pleasure and every word true. - - x

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.

                      • Neville

                        Cheers GF60..... N

                      • orchidee

                        I'm a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.

                        • Neville

                          Done but not finished

                          • orchidee

                            Doh! Now it's raining - here anyway. It will have to wait.

                          • SerenWise

                            I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.

                            • Neville

                              Now I'm blushin again.... thank you Seren N



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