I found a lady from overseas
In a land unknown to me
She told me it's Portuguese
I replied it's heaven to me
Braking patterns from memories
Within a click opening dreams
Forever swans twisting around
Flying over heart broken land
loving life in tattooed hands
Written on these open arms
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I met my lady on a dating website just over 3 years ago, I would never of thought it could happen this way. Life can be full of surprises if you keep playing its game!
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as far as I am concerned, this is not only delightful... it is probably your best yet..... Neville
Cheers buddy bound to get 1 in over 300, I could also say the same for my women 😉
A fine write Dan.
Thank you kindly!
A wonderful find is a love from distant lands - congrats dear Dan - here's wishing you growing happiness
Always appreciated
It is definitely worth living for!
It's fun reading this, and even more while playing that video.
Cheers,
With Love and Laughter,
Joker44
Thank you very much, yeah it played in my head a few minutes after posting it!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Share in her true beauty.
Lovely Dan
Beautifully said
I shall bask in it
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
That 'click' has changed your life into the wonder of love, may it grow from strength to strength as I am sure it will.
Always appreciated
My friend, I'm sure it will too
Your love poems are your best, must say something about your truth...
💙💚💛🧡❤️💜
I can never write good love poems!
Thank you so much and never say never, just keep writing and you'll find it 😉 it's never gone can just get a bit lost....
Oooo thanks for the inspiration!
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