TORN.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

TORN.

 

We, looking to Now
..........................may see icy goodbyes.
Cold can scribe lonely,
...............................but for only a while.


Though drifts of bleak past
....................   still freeze hurts to pains.
Hope melts the quicker
........................  on frost written names.

 

Regret will not add 
.........................  healing potion to time.
Coping seems saddest
..................when tears make eyes blind.


Fresh dawns ahead may
..........................   December transform.
Love's call once begun
...............  helps torn wings Spring-soar.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2019 03:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • Neville

    A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      I just read yours now this
      As if we are all connected 😉

      • Neville

        I think maybe we are 🙂

        • Fay Slimm.

          it would seem so to me too - -- connected for sure.......x

          • Poetic Dan

            Just must add sorry to still the thunder for your wonderful comment, Mr N 😉
            Tit was fabulous
            Rhythmically
            Done!

          • Poetic Dan

            Wow, I felt so much from this, I'm not sure what else to say.
            It Just what I needed
            Thank you in so many ways!

            Much peace and love

            • Fay Slimm.

              My pleasure Dan is your needs are met by this read today. May peace go with you too. ... ..Fay

              • Poetic Dan

                Even more so now. Brilliant!

              • Suresh

                Moving, deeply moving

                So expressed

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Grateful thanks for your visit and comment Suresh - - pleased you enjoyed the read.

                • EliDagger

                  Beautifully descriptive, loved it!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very poignant words Fay, wonderful.



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