TORN.
We, looking to Now
..........................may see icy goodbyes.
Cold can scribe lonely,
...............................but for only a while.
Though drifts of bleak past
.................... still freeze hurts to pains.
Hope melts the quicker
........................ on frost written names.
Regret will not add
......................... healing potion to time.
Coping seems saddest
..................when tears make eyes blind.
Fresh dawns ahead may
.......................... December transform.
Love's call once begun
............... helps torn wings Spring-soar.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: April 3rd, 2019 03:04
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Comments6
Good write Fay.
A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville
I just read yours now this
As if we are all connected 😉
I think maybe we are 🙂
it would seem so to me too - -- connected for sure.......x
Just must add sorry to still the thunder for your wonderful comment, Mr N 😉
Tit was fabulous
Rhythmically
Done!
Wow, I felt so much from this, I'm not sure what else to say.
It Just what I needed
Thank you in so many ways!
Much peace and love
My pleasure Dan is your needs are met by this read today. May peace go with you too. ... ..Fay
Even more so now. Brilliant!
Moving, deeply moving
So expressed
Grateful thanks for your visit and comment Suresh - - pleased you enjoyed the read.
Beautifully descriptive, loved it!
Very poignant words Fay, wonderful.
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