Fay Slimm

TORN.

 

 

TORN.

 

We, looking to Now
..........................may see icy goodbyes.
Cold can scribe lonely,
...............................but for only a while.


Though drifts of bleak past
....................   still freeze hurts to pains.
Hope melts the quicker
........................  on frost written names.

 

Regret will not add 
.........................  healing potion to time.
Coping seems saddest
..................when tears make eyes blind.


Fresh dawns ahead may
..........................   December transform.
Love's call once begun
...............  helps torn wings Spring-soar.

Comments8

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • Neville

    A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      I just read yours now this
      As if we are all connected ;)

      • Neville

        I think maybe we are :)

      • 2 more comments

      • Poetic Dan

        Wow, I felt so much from this, I'm not sure what else to say.
        It Just what I needed
        Thank you in so many ways!

        Much peace and love

        • Fay Slimm

          My pleasure Dan is your needs are met by this read today. May peace go with you too. ... ..Fay

          • Poetic Dan

            Even more so now. Brilliant!

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            💖 it...Fay
            Blessings my friend!
            😊🌹

            • Fay Slimm

              Glad the write drew your attention dear Claudette - thanks so much for your read and comment.

            • Suresh

              Moving, deeply moving

              So expressed

              • Fay Slimm

                Grateful thanks for your visit and comment Suresh - - pleased you enjoyed the read.

              • LittleGift

                This really spoke to me Fay, quite the emotional read. Beautifully done as ever

              • EliDagger

                Beautifully descriptive, loved it!

              • Goldfinch60

                Very poignant words Fay, wonderful.



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