Big Empty Space

Neville

Big Empty Space

 

Such a space

She once filled

Now gone though

Tis like she

Never was

 

While in the

Distant distance

Love lies wounded

And appears

To be so very bruised

 

Henceforth tho

As I calculate

This unexpected

Extra space

Now available to me

 

I sit recalling days

Bemused as much

By her sheer absence

Yet despite it I still do

Feel so very much abused

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2019 03:24
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.

    • Neville

      I am truly grateful to you my friend for your very kind and always encouraging remarks...Always appreciated dear Fay... Neville

    • orchidee

      Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
      Much space in your garden?

      • Neville

        there was indeed a sadness that inspired these words.. thank you for checking them over... yes.. my garden is quite substantial..

        • orchidee

          Thanks N. Aww, why they make space for me - several acres? I only said 'I'm gonna sing!' lol.

        • Poetic Dan

          Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
          Very grateful

          Much peace and love

          • Neville

            Much appreciated Dan.. Peace & All Good Things back at ya.. Neville

          • Suresh

            Deeply felt

            • Neville

              Hey, how kind is that... thank you my friend.. Neville

            • orchidee

              You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.

              • Neville

                You are not nagging, maybe delirious, take another handful of those purple pills

                • orchidee

                  Yes - the pills may help the huge empty space between my ears!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.

                  • Neville

                    I am most grateful to you GF60..... thank you for that kind thought... Neville



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