Big Empty Space
Such a space
She once filled
Now gone though
Tis like she
Never was
While in the
Distant distance
Love lies wounded
And appears
To be so very bruised
Henceforth tho
As I calculate
This unexpected
Extra space
Now available to me
I sit recalling days
Bemused as much
By her sheer absence
Yet despite it I still do
Feel so very much abused
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Author:
Neville (
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Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
I am truly grateful to you my friend for your very kind and always encouraging remarks...Always appreciated dear Fay... Neville
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
there was indeed a sadness that inspired these words.. thank you for checking them over... yes.. my garden is quite substantial..
Thanks N. Aww, why they make space for me - several acres? I only said 'I'm gonna sing!' lol.
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
Much appreciated Dan.. Peace & All Good Things back at ya.. Neville
Deeply felt
Hey, how kind is that... thank you my friend.. Neville
You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.
You are not nagging, maybe delirious, take another handful of those purple pills
Yes - the pills may help the huge empty space between my ears!
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
I am most grateful to you GF60..... thank you for that kind thought... Neville
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