Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim cheroo
If you'd be so kind, I'd liked to share this tale with you!
About at little boy that never grew up, he carried with him a rhythm of luck.
He sees all the things, he must do as a man
But inside him his spirit, stays as childish as it can
Still lost in the woodland, trying to fly like Perter Pan
Never losing sight, of all he has in his hands
It was some...
Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim cheree
Pulled from endless pockets with rhymes and melodys
For nothing could ever damper the bob his step
He'd be walking along with Broadway in his head
Looking weatherd and tethered but never inside
This place was a washer of the dark and the light
He then opened a door to see more of his kind
Singing...
Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim cheroo
Hello poetic Dan how nice to finally meet you
Welcome to the many wondering lost souls
All with their own pockets full of glitter and gold
Sharing their memories from within a river of love
All swirling around to make a world of inspiration
All lifting and sweating pouring everything out
With a dance of..
Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim cheree
We know we're all broken and looking to flee
But somewhere deep down we know it to be
Never gone only lost in rhymes & rhythm at sea
When it all calms down you'll be seeing clearly
Until that moment comes keep whistling with me
Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim chereeeee.
I'll now leave you with a respectful toodaloo da lee
Thank you for listening and have a great day
I'll be thinking of you when you're trying to not say...
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hope you enjoyed this as much as I did, I can even see a puppet show in my mind for this. Thank you if you take the time to read my rhymes You make it more magical every single time Much peace and respect
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Thanks for this DAN : Wonderful visual & a wonderful VERSE ! Its 10pm here (NZ) so it will send me HAPPY to bed after me hot Milk & Manuka Honey. None of us really wants to grow up ! @ 30 Im engaged but not married so I have licence to still act like a child. I sing songs while I massage my Patients (Im a Physio !) and I always try to spread sweetnes & light to my patients who are recovering form Surgery. Love Mary Poppins and all the Songs from Mad Musicals like Cats : Sound of Music : Chicago : Oliver etc. Thanks for caring & sharing : Im still smiling !
Blessings & Much Joy & Happiness
Yours ANGELA 🧡
What a beautiful comment thank you so much
I'm sure under your care if be fixed right up!
Thank you being perfectly who you are
Always appreciated
Much respect and love
A fine write Dan. But I don't know this Perter Pan guy! (heehee).
He's my friend, I'll introduce you one day 😉
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
How absolutely delightful... took me way back, so it did..... N
I've actually never been so excited to share one until this. Lol
Always appreciated my friend
And your absolutely has got another poem running!
Much peace and respect
my pleasure.........
Dan,
What a magical write!
I totally enjoyed the read!
The visual and song complement your poem extremely well!
🎼...and a chim chimney chim chim cheroo to you too...🎼
~Laura~
It definitely made my day but its even better now I've shared it with you!
Chim chimney chim chimney chim chim cheree,
Thank you blister in poetry 😉
Let's make the rest of our days in harmony
Right on, poetic brother!
Enjoy your Sunday!🤗
Yes, as Laura said, it's a magical write, I even read it twice.
No matter what you do in life, no matter how harrowing the plight, it all works out, if you do it with a bob in your step and a smile on your face.
Thnx for a charming imagery.
That sung so well in my head, even getting a second read.
I think my whole world has become a symfony
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Never lose the Bob in your step!
Still singing the number inside my mind Dan - - a wonderful feeling is the magic of song.
Lol great!
it does makes things feel a bit light or darker, however you wish to flow.
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
Oh chim chim chutney to you now.... Grrr you put that damn song in my brain....
Such a delightful ditty that reminds us we are all kids inside.... its only the outside that grew up and got haggard and took on those horrible responsibilities we'd be far happier without... or would we? Nah, they just brought another load of joy with them.... i mean... kids... theyre worth losing our childhood for aint they? chimn chim cher oh sod off im still singin it....
bah ... humbug!
Bubby that was so funny my tears were giggling as they jumped from my eyes.
You've made my day
Always, always appreciated
My friend!
Super carefree write Dan, we are all still children in our minds.
Glad we agree my friend!
Always appreciated!
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