Come and tell what you have done today
But you have to make it rhyme.. Okay
I'll tell you the first thing I Did
I went to the loo and wrote this
I thought that was going to be more fun
Probably should have waited till later on
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Bit of fun never hurt anyone ;) Much peace and respect Keep rhyming it!
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A good write Dan.
Thank you
Always appreciated
I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I'd overslept.
He he, that was so wonderfully lovely.
A little rhyme can make me so happy
First of all i went for as osteopath rub
on the way home i thought about the pub
but that can wait for i have things to do
gotta work to make up for the cash i blew
so i sat and looked at a poetry site
my friends write good stuff but theres also loads a shite
todays theres a short one from my pal Dan
amazing bloke jumps through the window in his van
and now he says our comments have got to rhyme
thats a dirty trick, rotten swine
You just keep getting better and better, I could not of asked for a better laughter today.
Sir you spoil me such treasure as your time and rhyme!
With the up most respect
Always appreciated!
Dan,
If it’s rhyme that you want,
Then I’ll forget my croissant!
You’re the commandant
Of the rhymes that you want!
After all...
you are the in residence savant!
~Laura~🌻
Now that's a top rhyme
Of a blister in time
I'd definitely feel lost
Without the L in my life
Now you've made me think of the other L on this site, I must pop over to see if she's alright.
That's how good you are at giving a caring vibe
Keep being awesome
Much respect and love
🤗🤗
You wrote this while you went to the loo
I am on the loo, reading what's written by you
NO IMAGES HERE
PMSL @ no images here
Maybe I should of when I read this!
As I nearly pissed myself laughing....
Legend, thank you
Much appreciated
Andy went for coffee
With his loving wife
It’s great to be together
With the trouble and strife
That was a giggle and sweet but what else would I expect from the most top gentleman!
Thank you Andy
Always appreciated
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