Hey....

Poetic Dan

Come and tell what you have done today
But you have to make it rhyme.. Okay

 

I'll tell you the first thing I Did
I went to the loo and wrote this

 

I thought that was going to be more fun
Probably should have waited till later on

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 10th, 2019 02:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: Bit of fun never hurt anyone ;) Much peace and respect Keep rhyming it!
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    A good write Dan.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you
      Always appreciated

    • Fay Slimm.

      I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I'd overslept.

      • Poetic Dan

        He he, that was so wonderfully lovely.
        A little rhyme can make me so happy

      • dusk arising

        First of all i went for as osteopath rub
        on the way home i thought about the pub
        but that can wait for i have things to do
        gotta work to make up for the cash i blew
        so i sat and looked at a poetry site
        my friends write good stuff but theres also loads a shite
        todays theres a short one from my pal Dan
        amazing bloke jumps through the window in his van
        and now he says our comments have got to rhyme
        thats a dirty trick, rotten swine

        • Poetic Dan

          You just keep getting better and better, I could not of asked for a better laughter today.
          Sir you spoil me such treasure as your time and rhyme!

          With the up most respect
          Always appreciated!

        • Laura🌻

          Dan,

          If it’s rhyme that you want,
          Then I’ll forget my croissant!
          You’re the commandant
          Of the rhymes that you want!
          After all...
          you are the in residence savant!

          ~Laura~🌻

          • Poetic Dan

            Now that's a top rhyme
            Of a blister in time
            I'd definitely feel lost
            Without the L in my life

            Now you've made me think of the other L on this site, I must pop over to see if she's alright.
            That's how good you are at giving a caring vibe

            Keep being awesome
            Much respect and love

            • Laura🌻

              🤗🤗

            • Suresh

              You wrote this while you went to the loo
              I am on the loo, reading what's written by you

              NO IMAGES HERE

              • dusk arising

                PMSL @ no images here

                • Poetic Dan

                  Maybe I should of when I read this!
                  As I nearly pissed myself laughing....

                  Legend, thank you

                  Much appreciated

                • Goldfinch60

                  Andy went for coffee
                  With his loving wife
                  It’s great to be together
                  With the trouble and strife

                  • Poetic Dan

                    That was a giggle and sweet but what else would I expect from the most top gentleman!

                    Thank you Andy
                    Always appreciated



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