Sometimes you'll walk their path
In order to step out of their shadow
To become you
It's beautiful
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is for a friend trying to cut the alcohol out of their life and repeating their own childhood memories. Thank you for your strength, helping me keep up mine. As do many here sharing in this journey of our lives!
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Being yoiurself is so wonderful. Well done Dan.
Thank you, I think I'm getting there 😉
Dan,
You’ll get there ! I have no doubts about that! You’re stronger than you think you are! I wish your friend the best on his/her journey!
~Laura~🌻
I swear I'm just stuck on this last roundabout, now I see the exit sign!
Thank you kindly for the thought for her and any other looking to break their own pattern.
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
Have a wonderful day!🌻
A fine inspiration Dan. Erm, where ya getting to? Will ya know when ya have got there? If ya are going to the Co-op, ya will need the No.11 bus! lol.
Dam it! I'm on the No.10
No wonder it just keeps going
Around & around, again & again
Still in enjoying the ride
Thank you as always
For the laughter you bring
Doh! lol. Ahh, the circular No.10 route. Hey, a guy was having me on. I said 'Which bus is it to get to Saturn?' He said 'The No.8'. I said 'Hey, you know by now that the No.8 goes to Mars; you're pulling my leg!' Much more of this and we'll go potty!
I Love this short but inspired few lines Dan - -- must read it over again and am putting it into my faves with thanks.
Always so kind thank you, it is nice when so much can come from just a few words.
Appreciate the faves
i wish I had the elixir that would eradicate addiction, I would share it with all of humanity.
Meanwhile, your realizing it is half the battle, so stay strong.
Thank you my friend I can get addicted to most things very easily and I'm glad to say alcohol is not one of them!
Although I'm happy to admit there's definitely other parts I'm working on.
Always appreciate your words
Definitely with a positive vibe
To find our elixir then share with the world!
I dunno what normal is, I'm not sure about acceptable either.
In so many ways i don't fit in. It's easier for me to not try to fit in. In this way, although i'm insular. I can just be me. With all the crazy stuff that's happened in my life and stuff done to me it only comes to a head when i try to fit in.
But i'm just me, finding my own way, my journey.
Hah! and you thought this was bout you..... one thing i like about myself is my sense of humour and self ridicule.. ooppss that's two.
Well it is good to like more than one thing 😉
Really enjoyed read about you though! Lol
This tho short is packed with good intent and words and meaning could not be better spent.... Neville
Ha ha, Brilliant buddy!
you have my word, tis true each one of em.... N
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