at closure

Frank Prem

when the wind
twirls the sky


when the sun says


all ships set anchor
at the fading of light


the day
is reflected
the palette


in these moments
of closure
the waters
are wide



  • Author: Frank Prem (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 12th, 2019 06:12
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 17
  • User favorite of this poem: MendedFences27.
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Such a peaceful read Frank - delightfully penned this change at the coming of night. First class write.

    • Frank Prem

      Hi Fay. It's a sweet scene, isn't it?

      I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

    • orchidee

      Good write Frank.

      • Frank Prem

        G'day, O. Glad you enjoyed it, thank you.

      • MendedFences27

        Loved your imagery in this . "wind twirls the sky," "the waters are wide," in particular. A great ending of the day. A poem to take us through the last moments of daylight. It reminded me of times at sea, surrounded only by horizon, and a brilliant Sunset, magnificent. Loved your poem. Think I'll Fav it. - Phil A.

        • Frank Prem

          Thank you, Phil. I'm delighted to be able to share a pleasant moment from this part of the world.

          Glad you enjoyed it.

        • Goldfinch60

          That palette can show the highlight of the day.

          • Frank Prem

            Very pretty at the end of the day, GF. Autumn over here.

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