Frank Prem

at closure

when the wind
twirls the sky

 

when the sun says
goodnight

 

all ships set anchor
at the fading of light

 

the day
is reflected
the palette
applied

 

in these moments
of closure
the waters
are wide

 

~

Comments5

  • Fay Slimm.

    Such a peaceful read Frank - delightfully penned this change at the coming of night. First class write.

    • Frank Prem

      Hi Fay. It's a sweet scene, isn't it?

      I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

    • orchidee

      Good write Frank.

      • Frank Prem

        G'day, O. Glad you enjoyed it, thank you.

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Excellent poem!
        love the art picture as well....
        😊

        • Frank Prem

          Thank you, Claudelle.

        • MendedFences27

          Loved your imagery in this . "wind twirls the sky," "the waters are wide," in particular. A great ending of the day. A poem to take us through the last moments of daylight. It reminded me of times at sea, surrounded only by horizon, and a brilliant Sunset, magnificent. Loved your poem. Think I'll Fav it. - Phil A.

          • Frank Prem

            Thank you, Phil. I'm delighted to be able to share a pleasant moment from this part of the world.

            Glad you enjoyed it.

          • Goldfinch60

            That palette can show the highlight of the day.

            • Frank Prem

              Very pretty at the end of the day, GF. Autumn over here.



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