That I tried my best,
To give you the best,
Most passionate,
Love,
I liked you like no one else,
I changed, gave all of me,
For you, to you,
You said you changed,
You said you are not feeling,
In a cage anymore,
But truly,
You never stopped,
Wanting, needing, seeking,
Attention from others,
Always for more,
Never enough...
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Author:
SensualRomantic (
Offline) - Published: April 15th, 2019 02:49
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Superbly written - not usually the subject matter I usually go for but this a superb exception.
Thank you very much. So I can only post once a day? That's a bit tough...It's very limited for a writer.
but do please keep posting - if this is anything to go by your work needs to be read. I have been posting here for several years and find it taxing to write enough (of reasonable quality) to maintain that output. That's why I resort (as today) in writing a lot of whimsical pieces which don't take so much effort. Having said that I am primarily an artist and this occupies most of my creative time.
Very well done
Thank you for sharing
Well yes, one poem per day (24 hours) it appears. Write some in 'reserve' as I do sometimes. Then you have poems to be going on with.
On one site there was no limit per day, but poets couldn't get round to reading them all. Then they disappeared into smoke after 24 hours - or archived!
Written from the heart these are the best sort. I good write difficult to achieve when the ending depicts avenues of regret at losing a love. Thanl you for sharing
A poignant feel to this write of
few lines yet excellent length to describe how some find it hard to avoid needing attention - -- look forward to reading more of your work.
Beautiful and haunting.
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