when?
another
hollywood romance
perfectly executed
blissful finale
the promise
of happiness
ahead
sitting alone
before the
rolling titles
lip trembling
tears flowing
wondering
fearing
when?
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Author:
dusk arising (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2019 01:42
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Comments4
Nicely done.
Had a feeling of when I was between lovers, making peace with being on my own although I would of still appreciated finding someone.
Thank you
This was inspired by a poem i read on MPS whilst watching a happy ever after movie. Two sides of life in conflict.
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish for yourself dear D.A.
Thank you Fay. I'm not quite there yet LOL
it's gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ sir... N
I'll pass that on. Thanks Neville.
good on ya...
Very good emotion laden write d a.
Thanks Goldfinch, I had been reading something on MPS and put myself in her shoes. I don't know whether men can effectively write for women but this certainly was very moving in the writing.
Emotions can be cray things, at the moment with my wife being the way she is it is affecting me and I am much more emotive than I used to be, it could be the worry and the strain in caring but it is opening another world for me, maybe our emotions can tell us how to write for women - another mystery that may never be solved.
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