I can't tell you how to fix your problem
But I can tell you how I solved mine
It maybe close to what you're going through
If not then you'll still know a rhythm
Keep chatting to any old soul
In end we're all part of a whole
All playing a story to be made
Twisting Endlessly until the day
You no longer write on a page
Exiting right to another stage
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not sure where I went with this but I did enjoy it ;)
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Glad ya did not exit left, or ya would have been pursued by a bear, as Shakespeare says! That's about one of the thousands (well, total of about 3, lol) of lines I know from Shakey. He is not always wise. Some things he says are a bit dodgy, I think!
What there is a left! Must be the night bus going round the roundabouts, maybe I don't have to keep going in a circle.
Always appreciate your time
another one very much enjoyed.... I particularly like the first very brief stanza..... Neville
Always a pleasure good sir
Much peace and respect
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A clever way not only with words but with true advancement - another good read Dan.
Always appreciated my dear and may you have a wonderful day!
What if I was to say, how I turned:
AN OVER INTO A LOVER
AN END INTO A FRIEND
AN IF INTO LIFE
Thnx for sharing
That was FANTASTIC thank you for sharing my friend.
That other stage will tale you to places of glory.
Let's hope so my friend
Always appreciated
Great stuff. This tells of moving on through life and finding that life just gets better and better.
I like the picture, playing with words but... have you considered what you get if you put a gap between the letters 'e' and 'r' in therapist... the rapist.... careful who you send for therapy!
Hahaha, yes but truth be told a good counsellor will not call themselves that and if you see the word sell in it you are right! They are trying to sell you what you already know but have just forgot!
Always appreciate your time my friend
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