Little by little, i lose myself, but gazing you in me
I had never seen you before, but i had fallen in you
I am not poetess,but after knowing you, i am become lyricist
I am possession on you, but not asking for ownership of your thoughts
I want to be with you like a swarm of bees buzz around flowers
I want to win, but not think to defeat you
I want to flutter your dreams in my sky,but not to lose my beauty
I am brownie but not peachy women seeking place in you
May be this feel is called "love"
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Author:
Blackbeauty (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2019 03:56
- Comment from author about the poem: Love is wonderful feeling
- Category: Love
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WELCOME SINDHUJA (Lovely Name) Thank you for your first Poem : Your English is very beautiful in the way you express your LOVE : it is very LYRICAL !
Balanced lines ~ each one expressing an Aspect of Love !
Feeling ~ losing ~ gazing ~ falling ~ becoming a Lyricist
Posessing ~ swarming like a BEE round FLOWERS
Winning but NOT defeating ~ fluttering ~ Brownie but NOT Peachy
Seeking place in YOU ~ FEEL called LOVE ~ BEAUTIFUL !
Im in LOVE with my Fiancee BRIAN with whom I share this site.
Were getting married in 2020 and your lovely Poem expresses
just how I FEEL IN LOVE ~ Thanks for sharing
Yours through POETRY ~ ANGELA 🧡
That love falls out of your words wonderfully.
Welcome to MPS.
Thank you for your encouraging words. Hope will write more about love..
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