Being.
When I, on looking closer at
sun-beaming roses see
how sweetly they all meet
some Holy Decree of quietly
being themselves and
letting me just be me, I find
something vital drops
into my beating heart, like
a phial of truth newly bottled.
Proverbial coating begins to
slide with knife-like
precision and slits the plush
of pleached thought, mind
open I catch sight
of flora's pure motive much
clearer and now know
why a rose desires to be
naught but a beautiful rose.
So how I wish to be
no more than me.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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I being liking this poem Fay - terrible grammar there! lol.
every now and then. all one needs to have a really good day is to find the truth poemed thus.... Neville
You are too kind as always my friend - - thank yous galore for this lovely comment............
pleasure's mine
Wonderful words, we all must be ourselves but show our own life's beauty to others.
Yes showing beauty to others is the right way Goldy - my sincere thanks for your visit and comment.
Beautiful FAY : Thanks for sharing : Godliness with Contentment is great gain. Nature does not have to strive to achieve that ~ WE DO !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Too true that Nature never does more than to be itself -- a big thank you for your in-put dear duo.......... have a great camper-journey and write your adventures.
My Dear Fay,
Your prowess as a Poetess is supreme! Your sweet words and pic add fragrance to this delightful read which I enjoyed very much! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Dear Laura - your comments are always so generous and show your warm heart - many loads of thanks for your kind support ................ so pleased you enjoyed the read.
Wouldn't it be such a wonderful world if we all were content with the recognition of the beautiful thing we are and could see the beautiful thing in all that surrounds us.
Maybe there would be so much more respect for our planet and all living things.
Yes what a difference to world conditions if we were content with just being ourselves -- your wise comment helps readers see the way to go forward is to respect all living things........... thanks so much for your in-put dear D.A.
Maybe we can all be ourselves, and just like a rose, exude our talents for all to see.
Lovely subject and equally lovely poem
What a lovely outcome if we could be like a rose and quietly love being no more or less than we are....................... am so grateful for your visits and your continued support dear Suresh.
Splendid indeed what a wonderful read!
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
I love this, so beautifully and elegantly written with beautiful sentiment!
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