Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time

Poetic Dan

I'm finding my joy can be easily lost but easily found, once I take my time and write it all down.

 

Just like my guitar the more I use it, the more it needs to be put back in tune.

 

Everything needs to be tweaked or bumped back in line.
There's moments in this life that will feel perfectly synchronised
Other situations you'll think you've been demonised

 

This is where the silence comes in, all with a single ring
Theses are the thoughts you should be flowing with
Either it can be done or it cannot, either you will or you will not
After that choice you must let go, seeing there's no need to control

 

Take a moment to see deep within
As the breath we take, then release
Is the way our bodies rebalance it

 

Thank you everyone
For teaching me this
I write not to forget

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 25th, 2019 05:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: As like all my writing, there can be some miss wording or not even the ones I intended. I hope this is the same as what's in my head ;)
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  • dusk arising

    Yes absolutely right mate ! It's ok to make mistakes, to have the wrong thoughts, do the wrong thing so long as youre not a bad 'un in your heart. You just tune yourself up (love your analogy) and get back into harmony with all the other vibrations around you again.
    Simples!

    twaaaannnnggggg!

    • Poetic Dan

      Hahaha loved the ending!
      Really appreciated the giggle as this dog is hard work but he'll get it! Soon 😉

    • orchidee

      Good write Dan.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always appreciated
        Much love and respect
        I hope your evening goes as you expect

        Just rhyming for the fun of it 😉

      • Suresh

        Let it be, let it be
        Let it flow freely
        Don't tax yourself
        Don't fret about it
        When we stress to much
        It drains us of our energy
        So far it's not hurting another
        Let it be, be free, to be yourself


        • Poetic Dan

          As you always do so awesomely!
          Thank you for joining me!
          Let it be
          Let it freeee

        • Goldfinch60

          WE need to be sure within our own body, mind and soul. We all make errors or forget things but those that are important to us will always be there.

        • Neville

          I think you did good.. very good N



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