How many times (re-write)

dusk arising

 


How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness 

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 27th, 2019 00:13
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Comments5

  • Suresh

    If it's true love, JUST ONCE

    • dusk arising

      So many fruits ... so little time LOL

    • Goldfinch60

      The love that is true tastes so sweet so the bitter fruits are discarded.

      • dusk arising

        Take me to the tree oh wise one.

      • Neville

        One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat...

        enjoyed and then some.. N

        • dusk arising

          This fruit picking game is knackering.

          • Neville

            always crouch low and wear both goggles and full body armour.......... let me know how ya get on...... Nice one........ N

          • Fay Slimm.

            As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will outlive any sour taste in the end.

            • dusk arising

              My thoughts exactly, thank you.

            • Poetic Dan

              About 10 my friend but 3 or 4 I really but in and now I'm enjoying that wonderful fruits all day long!
              Much appreciated

              • dusk arising

                You are one of the lucky ones then sir.



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