How many times (re-write)

dusk arising

How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness

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Suresh April 27th, 2019 00:17
If it's true love, JUST ONCE
- dusk arisingApril 28th, 2019 10:37
  So many fruits ... so little time LOL
Goldfinch60 April 27th, 2019 00:45
The love that is true tastes so sweet so the bitter fruits are discarded.
- dusk arisingApril 28th, 2019 10:38
  Take me to the tree oh wise one.
Neville April 27th, 2019 03:35
One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat...

enjoyed and then some.. N
- dusk arisingApril 28th, 2019 10:38
  This fruit picking game is knackering.
- NevilleApril 28th, 2019 12:15
  always crouch low and wear both goggles and full body armour.......... let me know how ya get on...... Nice one........ N
Fay Slimm. April 27th, 2019 03:37
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will outlive any sour taste in the end.
- dusk arisingApril 28th, 2019 10:39
  My thoughts exactly, thank you.
Poetic Dan April 28th, 2019 06:59
About 10 my friend but 3 or 4 I really but in and now I'm enjoying that wonderful fruits all day long!
Much appreciated
- dusk arisingApril 28th, 2019 10:40
  You are one of the lucky ones then sir.

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