The sun rose to great me
As I lie so peacefully
My breath filled the empty
As I stood so gently
I asked for some
Guidance
To sing in
Abundance
Igniting my ebb & flow
Hearing our souls grow
Rapped up in a package
No need for the baggage
Released from a feeling
When sung for some healing
Now wake up with sunshine
Always on your mind
Absorb with the ocean
A rhythm of notion
That inside of our hearts
Love will define us
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The other weekend I sat with my step son play guitar and to our delight we actually made our jingle. Then my amazing young lady said she wants to sing, with in a second she came back with the first line. Within think of her peacefulness I could not help but carry it on! Live the life you love & love the life you live.
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And surely the love in our hearts defines the world around us too.
Great happy vibe in your words today. Like - happiness makes our inner sun shine. It radiates out to everyone. An occasional eclipse is permitted tho LOL.
Yes been saving this one! yeah I've been know to give the odd moon too, if we are on the same page lol
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed reminders of putting love first.
Trying to remind myself thanks for joining, always appreciated
You both singing from the same sheet there? Makes a terrible muddle if you're not! lol.
She told me it didn't make sense, but we're good at winging it 😉 muddle to some of perfectly in tune to others lol
Beautiful memories permeate beautiful thoughts, the best kind of healing Oitment
As again with your every reply.
Thank you kindly
Always appreciated
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
Always appreciated my good sir
That love will always be with you and show you the way.
That it has my wise friend
Always appreciated
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