Orchid
Like
An orchid
In a storm
.
You
Are bruised
And you are torn
.
You
Are no
Longer beautiful
.
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: April 27th, 2019 03:18
- Category: Unclassified
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Orchid
Like
An orchid
In a storm
.
You
Are bruised
And you are torn
.
You
Are no
Longer beautiful
.
Comments7
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.
It happens... thank you DA
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.
bless ya Fay..... N
Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡
congratulations & thank you.. Neville
What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it's a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.
Everyone should be famous for fifteen minutes... your time is up, but thanks for popping in.. N
Just call me Blossom - I've covered in it - blossom dust, that is!
and he said -----
I'D LOVE TO BE AN ORCHID ONCE
if you were more than once, you would be a bunch of them.... a whole gang... wow, now there's a thought... cheers..
Sad and sensitive little write
another one a bit like me then... cheers my friend... N
No need for a storm, we have many orchids and they fade after a time but we are secure in the knowledge that they will return.
cheers GF60
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