Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Between Mountains
What a ride that was
Never now to be forgot
Those awesome mountain
Passes beaten
Pale wood smoke rising
Hidden mountain croft
Where we might once have
Laid there naked
The forest now though
Stripped by hungry winter mouths
Makes way for bud and green
No remnant of a season past and still tho
As high we climb
Below obscured by rainbowed clouds
Yet still I remembered that would be
The perfect place to say goodbye
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Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE
Many thanks my friend.. muchly appreciated and then some..... Neville
Erm goodbye! Doh! Good write N.
thank you orchidee... Neville
You warm and romantic pen writing of "might- have -beens" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x
how very kind of you Fay, what a thought eh.... N x
Yes what a thought indeed............... x
You dancing round that May Pole now?!
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
Thank you DA , I do appreciate the visit and of course your encouraging comment ... N
Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.
my very sincere pleasure my friend and thank you Suresh...... Neville
Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN
Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡
My pleasure and thank you... Neville
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.
I guess that's why so many of us try to capture them by whatever means we feel most comfortable.. thank you my friend for your positively encouraging visit..... Neville
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