Unwrapped.
Happiness
was a romantic poem meant
Only For You.
A red rose on the pillow
of a four-poster and
sheets nectared with passion.
Happiness
was a taste of love's juices
on pursed lips.
A first drink of champagne
between bubbly kisses and
sweet coffee the morning after.
Happiness
was racing rain, naked swims
and wet massage.
A warm duo-bath at sunrise,
darkly decadent chocs and
soap fought for by splashing.
Happiness
now unwrapped breathes scent
on treasured thrills.
A captured event means time
back then stood still and
sent two the gems of rapture
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: May 1st, 2019 03:56
- Comment from author about the poem: An imagined walk down memory lane - - hope you enjoy..
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Comments9
Glad they had fun. Glad some one(s) had fun! Fido won't let me have fun. I will put him out the back yard a while, then let me hair down! lol.
You do that Orchi - and then have some fun........ thanks for the comment.
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb poem in a genre I can relate to and lose myself in..... Neville
So glad you found words in which to lose yourself Nev - - - - I was attracted by the poignant picture and the verse followed suit -- many thank yous for your warm support. ... x
no problem, no worries and always my pleasure.... x
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by reality.
Poets who dream can write the reality they imagine and please dear readers like you D.A. - - so pleased you enjoyed the sweetness you found in my verse called Unwrapped.
You lived, what I only dreamt of.
Thnx for stoking my dreams expressed so eloquently.
My pleasure is knowing you were moved by the read dear Suresh. Thanking you muchly for your lovely comment.
A true romantic
Ah - you see through me dear Andrew - an incurable romantic am I and glad you liked the read.
Ah, there's nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave something out. What a great stirring (not coffee) piece of poetry. "The gems of rapture" come only as time stands still, so very rare are they. Beautifully written. Loved it. - Phil A.
Your comment declares rapture a rarity Phil and so it is -- am delighted you found the read stirring and thank you a load for dropping by .
Marvellous I loved "Happiness" fille me full of joy with a bit of wishful thinking thrown in. You my friend have that rare talent of lifting people into the world you paint so wonderfully with you words, Thank you
What a wonderfully encouraging comment and thank you a million dear friend. So pleased you liked the repetition of the word Happiness.
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing another wonderful Poem ! For ANGELA & I ~ HAPPINESS is our Shared Love ~ PAST : PRESENT : FUTURE ! Weve been more HAPPY in the last Ten Days of TOGETHERNESS thanwe have ever been !
V 1. PAST We love memories of passion in a Four Poster with Curtains !
V 2. PRESENT Champagne & Sweet Coffee
V 3. Skinny Dipping and a Soapy massage !
V 4. FUTURE Unwrapping Love ~ layer by layer ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY ~ Love in the Spirit
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡 🧡 🧡
Your perceptive read and encouraging comment leaves me in no doubt that you both will follow the way to real happiness as you unfold each step with care on your way. Hugs galore to our lovely duo - - -............. xxxx .............xxxx - - from Fay
Happiness
Was reading your words
Flowing from your heart
Onto the page of your life
To be read by my eyes
And reaching my heart.
What a wonderful way to say how much you enjoyed the read about Happiness - thank you so very much Goldy.
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