Seven suns soared
But cast no shadow
Where the light stopped
Still
Oscillating oceans opened
Yet left sands unshifted
Where the waves caressed
Freewill
Bluebird blissfully belonged
Though had no need to land
Where the the sky, land and sea formed
Home
Dulcet doves deliver
Without a message from the master
Where everything and anything is beauty
Foreverafter
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sylviasearcher (
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Comments4
Beautifully written, I like the use of structure too
Don't stay away too long - miss your super pieces - and this is non exception.
I entirely agree with the points of view already mentioned by each of my reviewing predecessors..
Namely that this delightful poem is not only beautifully crafted, but is pleasing to the eye too.... and .. you have already been away too long... Neville
Awesomely written, the imagery , no need to land and in between wow. Kudos.
If u r there plz do review my newest poem too. So nice to read from u again.
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