Give me any beat and I'll try match it
Within any luck I could sell you a ticket
For my token I'll charge a pound or two
If you think this harsh, I understand you!
For with that one, and with that two
I could do a thing or two
Buy a loaf of bread and tin of beans,
Or some eggs for rest of the week
Once I heard, a man did sing, just a dollar would you bring
The rhyming was pretty good, sung about his own neighbourhood
Hearing his pure inner truths, inspired me to give mine you
Understanding this exchange, is much more than just playing games
It opens up new domains, in world full of hidden flames
Searching to find harmony
Harmonising in synchronicity
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is me trying to face an issue with money I have and trying to go with this new found flow of wanting to give more. It also came to me the other night, I should do audio blogs to help deal with hearing my own voice and nervous of others thoughts! Time to let go! As we all unique in this world, Everyone of you has helped me, Become nearly completely free!
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this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
That is does my friend
I'm gone with the wind
Letting out, all that comes in!
Reflecting from anyone listening
You mean the world to me......goosebumps must be true lol
my pleasure....
Let the two worlds meet
Let the responsible one speak
And then, to the past, say goodbye
As new life takes hold of thee
That was a fantastic first line and then a breath of air at the end, wonderfully inspirational.
Always much appreciated my friend
Have a great day
With peace and respect
Yep, you'll hear your own voice, doing them audio blogs. Will you go on and on? Will you waffle endlessly?! lol.
More thoughts than the ocean, I never lose motivation!
You wanting to give more? You mean money? No probs: 'All donations gratefully received; put ya cheque in the post to me!' heehee.
Oh, you mean give more generally - in poetry output, etc?
I would help in a heart beat, my donations of time in a little rhyme.
As many platforms as I can find!
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far better securer place, long may it get even better.
Every single day my friend!
Always appreciated
How could it not with the inspiration out there!
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