Contrariety
04/24/2019
God
I am life,
I am birth
I am redemption
I am light
Satan
I am love
I am pleasure
I am laughter
I am treasure
God
You are death
You cast shadows
Satan
You shun
I accept
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Author:
Suresh (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'd like to be a fly on the wall,
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Comments5
Super write but still thinking about the message.
Wouldn't you love to be a fly on the wall and listen in on their conversation
God - portraying self as compassion, Satan as deception
Satan - respresents self as pleasure, acceptor of all
Thnx for visiting
Thought Provoking my Friend I loved the read I am afraid I cannot comment objectively on God Thank you
Delving into the man made conceptions of good and evil will be confusing.
Harmony with the world accepting it's way (and protecting it from abuse) may well prove more productive.
Good provocative writing.
I was gonna write a similar poem (was I? lol) but I could not spell the title, so I never even got started on the poem! heehee.
You are the master, I am the pupil.
This is just a tease, play with it as you please
even on the toughest of days opposites often attract.. even if they only exist in the eyes and minds of mere mortals .... I like the way you encourage the reader to consider possibilities.... Neville
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