I wandered lonely as a girl
Without advice or information
I wandered lonely as a girl
No role model or inspiration
I wandered lonely as a girl
No one to care or hold me close
I wandered lonely as a girl
With ladders in my panty hose
I wandered lonely as a girl
“Rebellious” and “formidable”
I wandered lonely as a girl
Unconsciously so biddable
I wandered lonely as a girl
Identified by watchful losers
I wandered lonely as a girl
Arms open wide to my abusers
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Author:
Lulu Boatwright (
Offline) - Published: May 11th, 2019 03:02
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
Wow, that so powerful and sad
If this is you I hope this brought some peace.
Thank you for sharing
I must also add a massive welcome!
Good Morning LULU ~ Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first Poem beautifully structured ~ excellent Rhythm & consistent Rhyme pattern, Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry and your repetition of *I wandered lonely as a Girl* empathises your message and the Title *No-one cares* The neglect you empathise is the situation of many Urban Teen Girls todays Society ! No advice ~ No-one to care or cuddle ~ Unkempt ~ Rebellious ~ Formidable ~ Biddable ~ Watched & Abused. I (BRIAN) work in a Vocational College with TEENS and ANGELA & I work as Youth Leaders in a Church. Your poem rings very true for many vulnerable Teen Girls we encounter.
Thinking of YOU ~ Every blessing for the Future
Yours through poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Please visit our SITE ~ Thanks A & B 🧡🧡
Such emotion, Welcome! Keep writing.
Very emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
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