Bananas in bowl
yellow skins slowly turn brown
no sun tan lotion.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Perhaps not so obscure but quaintly daft.
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BANANAS IN PYJAMAS
IT 7PM HERE IN THE BAHAMAS
SORRY I MEANT AUCKLAND NZ !
Thanks for reprising UNCLE MIKE ~ great Abstraction ~ great Senryu. CONFUSIUS He say *A Banana a Day keep OOGIE OOGIE MAN away*
Keep them coming they brighten our Days & Nights
Tribute to the Late Great DORIS DAY today please visit !
LOVE & HARMONY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Aw thanks - you can't beat a banana unless you duffer from hyperkalemia. Loved DD - will look in.
Does hyperkalemia make you "duffer"?
Sure does - I often suffer the duffer lol
Now you don't see those greens evey day Michael
I imagine this is a piece the camera does not do justice to it looks very imposing and imressive
Great work again in both respects
It's one of my smaller works and does look better 'in the flesh'. It's still with me and I'm surprised it hasn't sold - other lesser works have long since gone.
raspberry sauce
in banana ice cream
sundae bloody sundae
Super - thanks da
A fine write and pic M. Would that be Oogie Berles, as A& B say? You met him/her?
Something to do with Company B ?
Oh as in the "the oogie boogie bugle boy of Company B"? Did I get it did i get it??? Laughing......
An obscure comment - you sure got it Lorna.
I love the daft little poem. But - and this is heresy because your paintings are amazing always - but I detest squishy brown bananas and that's what this painting is of (yes I know bad sentence ending) - up with which I shall not put. Perhaps there are more of us out here than you know and that's why it isn't selling.......... overripe banana phobia.
Been painting outside in Leicester University Botanic Garden today - hot sun - I'm now looking like a ripe banana - hope I'm not squishy.
As long as you don't smell like one........ Phew...............
Didn't know bananas had noses. 😉
If Picasso painted one it might have.........
Hahaha, love it! Feels like my nose, recovering from surgery. No sun for me
In the sun - nose damaged
Out of the sun - lack of vitamin D
Take you pick (so to speak)
I don't know what the H*** everybody is talking about ...... OH! I get it - jibber jabber.
Nor do I - I was lost even when I wrote the ditty - is there no hope?
Here's the oogie boogie bugle boy reference - WWII!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xh4ugYiXF-Q have fun!
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