They talk about you but I've never seen you, there is just a time when I cannot move.
No matter how hard I try I'm incapable of reaching you, the only thing I know is the freedom when you move.
I've heard whisper about you, each time I fall asleep. Then as soon as I'm awake, there is a distant unease.
Even when I deluminate to my least, I see a constant silhouette in the mist. I can only imagine what it's like, looking from the other side.
I guess this is where we are children of the stars, as we can witness all of the balance from a far.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I am struggling with something deep at the moment and the next few post will be me understanding, letting go, or holding on. This place is amazing, thank you all for your precious time. Still need to catch up with all of your writings of wisdom
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Yes balance is all we can benefit by Dan - I love the expression i"children of the stars" - we are made of the same stuff so we can shine if we so wish. Keep at that struggle my friend.
It has been reinforced here a few times and as soon as the line hit my head, it pleasure to say dusk arising came to my mind with the flood of the rest of you....o I hear more words I need to write, forever inspirational thank you 😉
4 years I've been sharing and reading a very wide range of thoughts
In this community some stayed and some are gone
Each one has left a branch ready for unique leaves
Everytime I photosynthesize from your sketch in me
I've cried, laughed and felt much love mixed with dark
Absorbing and collecting to truly feel like one
If you don't mind I'd like to a your name at the bottom of this one?
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the unity of opposites need not be opposed other than by their very existence and even then... peacefully.... very nicely composed my friend
That I like my friend, more words and thoughts to keep in my bank. Always appreciate your input my friend
my pleasure....
Geat write Dn
...and light needs life
Darkness needs nothing
BRAVO
Brilliantly said I'll loving all these little quotes, darkness does need nothing.
Always appreciated my friend
Do those theta and delta waves of our brain in sleep hold the gateway to reality our waking beta waves only glimpse?
More afoot here than we can perceive any further than a hint of it's existence.
Now that is making my brain wonder and tick but then I guess that is the fun of it. You my god sir, are a treasure of many enlightening thoughts for me!
As I've said before and will happily again
You are an appreciated soul to my inner stage.
Have a great day
Your recognition and independence from your past is well expressed in your writings.
That is all I can wish for on the inside my friend thank you for seeing the who I'm trying to become.
Really and always appreciated
Very good very deep write Dan. That balance is there for us all and we need to find that balance.
Your travels in your life have found that balance and from that your life is becoming full of wonder and peace.
Thank you the seesaw is becoming fun again.
Always appreciated
A reflection well needed
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