SINCE I MET BRIAN ~ IVE NEVER WALKED ALONE ~ AMEN
BRIAN & I : We love to EXPLORE
UP & DOWN steps in Pastures new
Venturing through a PRIVATE DOOR
Just to explore & savour the VIEW !
UP & DOWN steps in Pastures new
Lost in FRANCE or rural PENZANCE
Just to explore & savour the VIEW
*WALK ON* for US is a Game of Chance !
Lost in FRANCE or rural PENZANCE
Reading a MAP that*s upside down
*WALK ON* for US is a Game of Chance
In a New Country & In a New Town !
Reading a MAP that*s upside down
Makes US go LEFT : When WE should go RIGHT
In a New Country & In a New Town
Arrive at the INN in the Dead of Night !
Makes US go LEFT : When we should go RIGHT
Venturing through a PRIVATE DOOR
Arrive at the INN in the Dead of Night
BRIAN & I ~ WE love to EXPLORE !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love B & A 🧡🧡🧡
A PANTOUM is a classical poetic form ~ in which each line
is repeated systematically once only ! Lines 2 & 4 in Verse
One become Lines 1 & 3 (Lines 2 & 4 are new)in Verse Two.
This process is continued until the Final Verse. You decide
how many verses you want. In the above case FIVE. In the
Final Verse Lines 1 & 3 are Lines 2 & 4 of the Penultimate
Verse and Lines 2 & 4 are Lines 3 & 1 of Verse One ! By this
every line is repeated ONCE for emphasis. The First & Last
Line of the PANTOUM are identical ! Strangely enough it
really does work in practice ! Why not try one for Yourself !
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Author:
ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments5
As long as you are together in your life of love wherever you go you will never be lost.
As an aside the Song "You Will Never Walk Alone" is so meaningful in many ways. To me it alwasy remionds me of Carousel, the 1945 Rodgers and Hammerstein musical. The song is sung about half way through the musical and then it reprises at the end by that time I am in floods of tears so I do not watch Carousel anymore, I do play the music from the film and I had it on a couple of days ago.
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ I have seen & heard YNWA in Carousdel ~ BUT being a Scouser I always associate it with Liverpool FC ~ who we are very proud of this Season ~ and singing on the KOP ! My DAD tells me that when Billy Graham came to Liverpool in 1984 (I was almost ONE) the Crusade was at ANFIELD. Dad was in the Choir and they persuaded CLIFF BARROWS to Sing YNWA with a 1000 Voice Scouse Choir and the audience of 40,000 all joined in ~ ELECTRIC ! YES I guess after NOVEMBER ~ Angela & I will never again walk alone ~ Ive just got to get her back to ESSEX !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
I gotta work out the maths of his phantom (?) thingy first, before I go any further! Good write B&A.
I always repeat everything twice anyway; I said, I always....... Woof! Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido!
Loud applause dear duo for this first rate write - this one I must save to read again.
You PANTOUM do entertainingly well, it's a joy to read and sad it ends so quickly
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