Bang On

Neville

Bang On

After much persuasion

The young man was allowed

To remove his spectacles

And force himself like some blind butcher

Just a little way inside her

After the agony the sacrifice complete

The young couple examined

The consequence of love

And both were sick

 

When they had recovered

From their experience

He whispered

Tomorrow will be different wait and see

You bet it will

She answered with indifference

Tomorrow you can fuck yourself

If you call that fucking me

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2019 03:02
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    Fido could have barked, but he saw the 18+ box!

  • Neville

    that 18 box has an awful lot to answer for .. thanks for pitching in and reminding me of that restraining order..... Cheers... Neville

  • Fay Slimm.

    What a sham of a first-time union that was as told in truly bold verse - - -- yet not (I hope) from experience..........

    • Neville

      I will give ya two guesses Fay.... thank you for being gentle with me..... Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha ha - those glasses must take the blame...........

      • Neville

        Guessed wrong then.... oh' ye of little faith.... nowt but pure imagination and a bit o fun... N 🙂

        • Fay Slimm.

          I believe ya - -- but bet many wouldn't .................. ha.......... Fay (with as smile on me face )

        • dusk arising

          Next time he'll not take his socks off and he'll use the curtains to towel himself dry.

          • Neville

            now that would not be a first now, would it... 🙂 cheers DA... N

          • Suresh

            ..... so you found my diary. EH! and now the whole world knows.
            GEEE THANKS, for now I can openly laugh about it, as too old to be ashamed.

            • Neville

              You are never too old... or so they say.... thank you Suresh ... Neville

            • SerenWise

              Light hearted yet deep, nicely done

              • Neville

                Thank you muchly.

                Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                Good fun write, some have more experience than others.

                • Neville

                  thank you my friend... Neville

                • Christina8

                  LOL now thats a poem! And a hilarious one I think! Oh but I just can't imagine that being true. I could never say that to someone...

                  • Neville

                    Maybe you should give it a try..... cheers Christina..... N



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