Last Dance
The best rose in the garden
The warm blanket when I’m shaking with cold
The cool breeze when I find it hard to breathe
My eyes when I can’t see
Reason when I can’t make sense of it all
A waiting hand when I’m left behind
My morning when I dread the night
My conscience when I’m unkind
Yesterday today and tomorrow
Every good thing in life starts with you
My first and last dance on this dance floor
Last kiss, Just you me and the moon
- Author: Andrew Charles Forrest ( Offline)
- Published: May 24th, 2019 04:29
- Comment from author about the poem: Never knew a thing about love before you... My darling Margie
- Category: Love
- Views: 26
Comments8
Theres so much we learn about love with our years. Love itself teaches us.
Very touching piece from you today poet and I'm sure it will be treasured by the recipient.
Thanks DA
You really are a true romantic Andrew.. how lovely are these words... I presume they are for her indoors..... Neville
No other, and always N
I am a romantic, there is o much hate in the world
Just trying to balance things out
Thanks for your comments
good on ya mate.... N
A fine write Andrew.
Thanks Orchi
To find someone that preps you up
and a true partner is a rarity in present times, so to read your piece is a true delight.
True S
I count my blessings every day
I'm a lucky lucky man
Glad you liked it and thanks for your comments
If your're going to be dancing on the Moon can I join in by any chance? Lovely poem and I'm sure you'll get the sense of it failry soon.
More than welcome the more the merrier
Oh simply beautiful these romantic and appreciative words Andrew.
Thanks Fay for your kind words
Always appreciated
Love is always with us with that one person who is so special to us.
Fine loving write Andrew, (great name).
Thanks Andy (Great Name)
It certainly is and always will be
Have a great day
It is such a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for posting it. I really enjoyed it. My favorite lines are: A waiting hand when I'm left behind / My morning when I dream the night. So beautiful, so moving... The images are unforgettable... Thank you.
Thank you Jo I'm flattered by your wonderful comments
Have a great day
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