A Single Breath

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

A Single Breath

 

Without any doubt at all

He said

There is another world

Out there

A world of wonder wind

And wild

So then without a single

Word

She stole from him a

Gasp and sigh

Then kissed them back

To him

Before she smiled 

And waved

Then bid a fond goodbye

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 25th, 2019 02:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Yes life and sometimes the best bits are fleeting...
    Great piece again N

    • Neville

      thanks Andrew... N

    • Fay Slimm.

      The way to an amicable ending is found in this expressively tender verse - - fondness never begrudges the sight and experience of another world....... good read, nicely put and thank you Nev.

      • Neville

        Why thank you Fay.. thank you very much indeed... N

      • orchidee

        Goodbye then! lol. A fine write N.

        • Neville

          Hello and thank you.... Neville

          • orchidee

            Can you help N? I tried taking just a single breath for 24 hours one day. Why didn't I feel well after it? lol.

            • Neville

              no idea.......... maybe you should try for longer..

              • orchidee

                Sounds like a good idea to me, that does!

              • dusk arising

                Something mesmerising about a single breast, ... the i realised you had written 'single breath'.

                Most definitely theres this other world and its full of the ones that got away...... pretty people but rotters every one of 'em.

                • Neville

                  thank you for realising, in every respect.... respect... N

                • Suresh

                  In imagination, there is another world
                  What is aloof here, is abundant there

                  Thnx for the gasps and sighs

                  • Neville

                    my very sincere pleasure and thank you for checking in and checking out these words of mine... Neville

                  • SerenWise

                    This is very lovely 🙂

                    • Neville

                      you are very kind... 🙂

                    • seeker123

                      wow a beautiful message so fleeting yet it seems to last forever...

                      • Neville

                        How very bloomin kind of you seeker123.. many thank you's my friend.... Neville

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Those fleeting moments can be so special in both love and despair.

                        • Neville

                          you are so absolutely right my friend.... thank you GF60.... Neville



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