If i could stay,
then,
you would find me
in the dew
upon buds in April,
upon the raindrops of life
on springtimes showers.
Inside the gold
of leaf fall autumn,
and leaping from shadows
to greet the dawn
and gaze skyward
ever skyward.
Find me spellbound before
stormy crashing breakers.
Running with infants
joining in their joyous games.
There upon the smiles
of young loves lips
and inside the eyes
of old contentment.
Along each highway of adventure
towing a trailer of goodwill.
At rest between the amber flakes
of rust upon yesterdays autos.
And in the eye, your eye
which sees the love
in this beautiful world.
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Author:
dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Im not planning on going anywhere but yesterday i found myself inspired to write this piece.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Andrew Charles Forrest, Fay Slimm., Poetic Dan, L. B. Mek
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Comments11
I'm very thankful that you ain't going anywhere and this poem, my gosh is so beautiful and a magic thrust was put upon my a magic carpet for me to ride over your skies of this beautiful world. Totally awesome piece of writing. Can't wait for your next one to lavish upon the taste of your skilled writing. Perfect!!!
Wow! Thank you so much Kevin.
Yep, you staying then?!
Yup. See u at the bus stop.
It's an inspired piece indeed DA
Indeed
Thank you ACF.
Very beautiful write, conjures up lovely images
Thank you Seren Wise.
Dreams can take you anywhere
So, go ahead and travel to this place the words sketched.
Very enjoyable piece
I guess in appreciating the beauty within those things, i have indeed visited, and hope again to repeat those visits many times..... and there's more!
this is indeed a beautiful poem sir.. and for what its worth, I'm glad you aint going anywhere in a hurry........ Neville
I do get around a bit (damn car is ill at the moment tho) and find much to enjoy wherever it be. Thanks for your appreciation of this piece Neville.
pleasure mate
Some inspiration - a great write DA
Thanks M.E.
A piece to put aside and come back to read when the need rises - your expressions flow with inspiration and leave such a feeling of oneness with all kinds of nature - - an exceptionally good finalé too -- eyes that see love find a beautiful world - Saved this little treasure.
I kind of knew a poet with your affinity with the nature of things would feel this one and it pleases me to see you have. A little treasure eh? Thank you so very much Fay.
I've not read the comments yet but I know there be great as my friend you run through my mind on so many days and now you have made sure, there you shall always remain.
I am truly blessed to have connected with a soul like yours. Thank you again for sharing this as its the one that is now going to send me back to a needed sleep.
I hope this all was written well!
Well bless you Dan. I'm pleased that my words have meant stuff for you. I know that you too will be passing on worthwhile nuggets to people as and when. We are not special people. We are just caring people who have come through a few things we might call set backs (or were they tests given to us to prove our mettel in this one earthly existence... hmmm there i go .. i'm thinking about reincarnation in those words). Whichever it is, it's good to be positive and encourage positiveness in others.
wow, damn what a FIND!
thank you for not posting in a while, truly: or else I wouldn't have come looking and missed-out on one of the best write's I have ever read
That is high praise indeed sir and i thank you very much indeed. I think any of us with a few years under our belt could write this poem. I'm pleased to have found the words though. I have my ups and downs,i think i wrote this one on a good day.
Thank you again.
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