COMBUSTION.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Combustion.

 

Fired by voluptuous 
tease of crusts

is lust's physicality

minus love.

 

Ablaze with eruptions
of Circe's cup

is desire's volatility

minus love

 

Encased in combustion  
of fleeting fun

is resigned sensuality

          minus love.             

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 31st, 2019 03:48
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 35
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine write Fay.

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Remove the love remove the heart
    To tare a tear is torn apart
    Sweet and sensitive as always Fay
    BRAVO

    • Fay Slimm.

      Spot on with your comment adorning the poem dear friend - - so pleased you enjoyed the read.

    • Neville

      cleverly crafted, erogenously erotic, superbly sensual and terribly true... Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        ha ha -- - well I do declare how much you know me mon ami. Thank you so much for the smile your comment raised.

        • Neville

          smile on my friend... N

        • SerenWise

          Lovely piece, well structured

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thank you Seren - - glad you liked the structure of these few lines on love.

          • Laura🌻

            My Dear Fay,

            ‘COMBUSTION ‘ indeed!
            You’ve ignited your page
            with an excellent write...
            which I enjoyed reading!
            One caveat...
            Beware of Circe’s Cup!😉

            ~Laura~

            • Fay Slimm.

              I agree with the caveat Laura dear friend and so glad you enjoyed my take on combustion........

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              GOOD MORNING FAY ! 8:30am (SAT) in NZ a lovely bright AUTUMN DAY : Ideal for htting the Shops with Ruth (She is such a Blessing to ME !) and a Lazy Lunch on the Waterfront ! BRIAN (Bless his Heart) id going to have to drag me screaming from here in OCTOBER !
              What are you on FAY ? You latest POEMS have all been as HOT as late Spring ! But this one *COMBUSTION* has a TALE in the STING ! *MINUS LOVE* I think one reason why technically BRIAN & I are still SINGLE @ 31 & 35 is because we have never practised GRATUITOUS LOVE ! I'll massage your BACK if you massage mine etc etc ! In our BOOK if we *Make Love* without being in Love we are just *Sounding Brass & a Tinkling Cymbal* : AMEN ! It is indeed just Resigned Sensualty ! Make believe YOU love ME one more TIME ! BRIAN & I are Truely in Love : which is
              d why (although its very painful) we can remain FAITHFUL 11,500 miles apart : AMEN

              Blessings & Love in all you do
              Yos as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

            • Suresh

              Now I know the ingredients I was missing, lust, desire and sensuality,

              No wonder I was incombustible

            • Goldfinch60

              So true Fay, life minus love is empty.



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