4 years I've been sharing and reading a very wide range of thoughts
In this community some have stayed and some are gone
Each one has left a branch ready for unique leaves
Everytime I photosynthesize from your sketch in me
I've cried, laughed and felt much love mixed with dark
Absorbing and collecting to truly feel like one
Special thanks to Fay Slimm for inspiring this, with a simple comment on my post
To many other souls to mention, but all help me keep raising my own bar
One last shout out to my new top to carry on spending the love
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It's currently the school holidays and I've not had as much time to read others work but I'm so grateful to all that find the time to give to me. It will be returned
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You have come a long way in those four years Dan and I am sure that you will go further into the light of your world.
Yes I have and for the first time I think I actually feel worthy of it!
Thank you my friend
Good write Dan. Pity I been singing 4 years - seems like 400 years to everyone else! heehee.
May there be 400 more as it would never of been the same if you stayed on that bus 😉
Always appreciated
Some are gone and some remain.
Some are quite missed. MPS has attracted some quite outstanding personalities in the time i have been posting here and you sir rank highly amongst those outstanding persons.
You always GIVE of yourself and in that amazingly humble way about you that you have.
Always good to read your words.
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