I've seen you in the shower
Singing with all that power
Remembering your a flower
Rinsing over an inner tower
Then to dry hearing a soul shine
I wipe away a tear, knowing it's mine
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was was saved for a rainy day ;)
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Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.
Absolutely my friend
Good write Dan. That's OK then, as long as it wasn't me singing! lol.
I think it was!
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are there many bathers down on the beaches?
So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It's not unusual!
Yes I am getting a bit fed up with the rain and sadly no bathrooms round here!
I a bit of everyone in the shower, it's even better now I don't have to take a speaker from the stereo. Theses Bluetooth ones are perfect lol
SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN
Thanks for carin' an' sharin' DAN ~ However hard the times I've been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN
Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡
Thank you and I do agree there are many reasons for my to be grateful for what's on my plate!
Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you're almost a fish!!!!
Dried off with newspapers 😉
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