Fay Slimm

WE.

 

 

We.

 

Unsettled my sleep  
yet were I with thee
each night would be

     ecstasy we could repeat.     

 

Unrested my soul,
yet were I to hold 
thee as mine alone

destiny we would unfold.

 

Uneasy my mind,
yet were I now thine
ceased would be time

and we could paradise find.

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Comments6

  • dusk arising

    Eyyup lass, tha's nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort us wu fost sprung mattress.
    By gad many woh the neet ah spent laid a spoonin wi her from t'post office in t'high street.
    Paradeese indeed it woh!

    And i reet thank thee fo' bringin t'all back tuh me.

    • Fay Slimm

      Ha ha - -- Giggles galore over this piece of north country dialect and me trying to decipher it - glad the read took you back to spoonin times D.A. - -

    • Neville

      I double dare anyone to deny these words failed to put a smile on their face... they bloomin well did mine... delightful Fay & true..... Neville

      • Fay Slimm

        Ah - - you so charmingly compose comments that build up writing -confidence. A mighty big smile with this thank you from me mon ami .................. Fay

        • Neville

          I'm smiling too....

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN's return.
          Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
          V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
          V 3. Time would indeed cease if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !

          Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
          Blessings & Peace & Love as always
          Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Fay Slimm

            Yes you fitted in well to the feel and the words of this poignant reflection dear Angela - so glad it gives you strength to survive til October time. Hugs meanwhile from me with a big thank you for the read and comment............. xxxx

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN's return.
            Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
            V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each DAY : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
            V 3. Time would indeed cease : if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !

            Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
            Blessings & Peace & Love as always
            Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • orchidee

            We says this is a fine write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm

              Thanking you Orchi and glad you enjoyed the read.

            • Goldfinch60

              Ecstasy is ours Fay with your words.



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