Neville

Before I Go Blind

 

Before I Go Blind

 

Seize for me the sun

For I shall yet have the moons

Most fairest daughter

 

Comments7

  • Fay Slimm

    Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay

    • Neville

      your honesty becomes thee.. consider it done.. in the meantime tho... I thank you ........and true Neville

    • James Michael

      A plead to Azeline possibly? Intriguing I must say!

      • Neville

        intriguing is fine by me sir... thank you for being sufficiently intrigued to take a peek and leave a bit of you behind.... Neville

        • James Michael

          More than a peek, more of a ponder. The Daughter of the Universe has the answers.

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        • Suresh

          I keep reading, but can't get into your mindset......
          Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
          but then 😟😟😟

          • Neville

            there are those who look too hard & see nothing
            whilst others see only what they want to see

            your visit was good enough for me and at least you caught the sun

          • dusk arising

            But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
            Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.

            • Neville

              I have so much to look forward to... thank you for pointing me in the right direction.

              Neville

            • Andrew Charles Forrest

              I daren't look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
              Great write intriguing yes
              I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter

              • Neville

                I kinda like intriguing so thank you for taking a peek Andrew.... tis much appreciated

                Neville

              • kevin browne

                Provoking indeed. With such deepness and with such few words has opened up a whole new lot of worlds to dwell upon for people who read this bewildering piece.

                • Neville

                  I musta missed ya yesterday mate.... belated thanks are now on their way...

                  Neville

                  • kevin browne

                    Caught them. thanks, dude.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.

                    • Neville

                      and time is running out.... thank you my friend, you do us proud.....

                      Neville



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