Before I Go Blind
Seize for me the sun
For I shall yet have the moons
Most fairest daughter
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Neville (
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Before I Go Blind
Seize for me the sun
For I shall yet have the moons
Most fairest daughter
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Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay
your honesty becomes thee.. consider it done.. in the meantime tho... I thank you ........and true Neville
I keep reading, but can't get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟
there are those who look too hard & see nothing
whilst others see only what they want to see
your visit was good enough for me and at least you caught the sun
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.
I have so much to look forward to... thank you for pointing me in the right direction.
Neville
I daren't look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter
I kinda like intriguing so thank you for taking a peek Andrew.... tis much appreciated
Neville
Provoking indeed. With such deepness and with such few words has opened up a whole new lot of worlds to dwell upon for people who read this bewildering piece.
I musta missed ya yesterday mate.... belated thanks are now on their way...
Neville
Caught them. thanks, dude.
Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.
and time is running out.... thank you my friend, you do us proud.....
Neville
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