Inspiration is drawn from everything and nothing
You will do it today and it will probably go unnoticed
Even if it does you'll probably find it hard to believe
That all it took was and an open heart with authenticity
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yesterday while I was was taking a stroll and practice, hoping to not see many people. Three wonderful lady's gave me a wave as I sat there and played, as I walked back around there they were again. As I approached we all had smiles, one asked if I could play a song. I went with the easiest one I know and played nervously letting go, they helped me more than they will ever know. Then my final inspiration came from a fellow poet, giving all they have to give. What a beautiful word this truly is! Pat yourself on the back because you are part of it.
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"I once was lost but now am found, was blind but now i see"
How perfectly appropriate.
"Through many dangers, toils and snares I have already come;
'Tis grace has brought me safe thus far. And grace will lead me home"
Wonderful message for you, me and all in those finely penned lyrics.
Thank you buddy I have not picked it up for over a year and this was one of the first songs I want to learn as it's never left my spirit for the first time I heard it as a kid.
I thank you so much for the encouragement to get me off my own lifes story. Its a slow change but I can feel the difference between the two, it's one thing to know and another to feel.
Always appreciated
My thoughts were something like this.... you've got a new head on these days and you know it, but you are very self centred with your writing, that keeps you on the edge of self doubt which would be good to leave behind .... so.... with your new head... write about other stuff with your new self/world - knowledge/love and maybe that will give you a greater confidence about yourself as you are relating to things outside of yourself...... i'm writing this as i'm about to dash off out to work...i hope it makes sense.... if it doesn't then pester me lol.
Perfectly my friend and thanks for helping my reply to nevill.
For the first time I don't see someone saying self centered as a negative, even more so from a person I trust!
a splendid sentiment both penned and played to perfection......
Neville
Ha well there is always alot of emotions in all I do but I am glad I've picked the violin back up.
Always appreciated my friend
And feels like a band of brothers I've never had on the site.... O I think that will be Next one, this inspiration never stops lol
write on....
May that open heart remain that way to allow all the good in life into it.
It's never closed my friend and glad to meet many others with there's open too.
Inspiration generally blindsides you, and that's it's beauty.
Do I shine that bright must be why I can't sleep tonight 😉
Always appreciated my friend
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