Out on the waves, in the wind, on the sea
A big patch of blue with a small patch of me
Bringing the peace and the calm that I crave
Bringing me solace on each coming wave
The wind drives me onward, the tide marks my day
The billowing canvas that shows me the way
The way to new places and faces and times
Lifting my spirits and calming my mind
So I’m out on the waves, in the wind, on the sea
The Sadness behind that now let’s me be
New places and friends I can’t wait to see
Out on the waves, in the wind, on the sea
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Author:
dragonsnark (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This just popped into my head, I’m not really a poet so please give me some feedback....
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Sry good write, may the sea and the sky kep head clear as you head towards the light in your life.
Welcome to MPS.
Thanks.
It seems that this flowed freely, and that's what's poetry is all about.
I sometimes worry that the rhymes are too strong and there is too much rhythm. I think maybe the words come out as musical lyrics.. In the past, I have written rap like lyrics and set them to music, should I post them here or would that be inappropriate?. As I said, I have little idea where this stuff comes from....
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