Are We ?
Are we the real thing
whose love lasts for life ?
Souls destiny picked ?
A significant item ?
Mates angel-kissed ?
A gift heaven provided ?
Two joined at the hip ?
Stars who collided ?
Amour fate-assisted
A pair set for paradise ?
Or are we just ships
who pass in the night ?
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Fay Slimm. (
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sometimes it is best not to know.... the anticipation and uncertainties regarding destinations and what if's make the journey all the more interesting... and here, you more than adequately prime your reader with each tantalizing possibility but which still remains an unanswered question.......... N
Yes the journey is the thing as you so wisely say my friend - just though my play with words and phrases today - - so no answers needed................
Can I help then, Neville? Where ya going on the journey? To Mars? Will you need the No.7 bus, or the No. 11, to get ya there?! Fat lot of help I am. lol.
Dunno - the last lines. I got shipwrecked! No! Enough frivolity. lol. A fine write again Fay.
Thanks for sharing again FAY ! Brian & I love your LOVE POEMS they are so so experiential. Brian and I have both experienced (in the past) what we thought was TRUE LOVE but like so many TEEN & post TEEN romances they faded & died. When we first MET we were both : fully rigged Sailing Ships (dressed to the NINES !) passing in the night ! BUT as we passed something happened (a miracle) we both dropped ANCHOR : and sailed right into each others arms ! O Fay you*ve made me cry for JOY !
Fortunately it was a DANCE (at the Hospital !) but we both knew enough about LOVE to know this was Heaven Sent TRUE LOVE ! Thankfully when its a SLOW WALTZ nobody notices TWO STRANGERS becoming ONE in a matter of minutes ! INDESCRIBABLE but it really happened ! Your recent POEMS really touch a chord with US and Ive printed them and pasted them in my DIARY : AMEN ! YES FAY *We are the real thing : and Our Love will last for ETERNITY* WE plan to Marry next EASTER but we became ONE (Physically & Emotionally Married) in that first Romantic Dance TOGETHER for EVER. More please FAY Your Love Poems bring BRIAN right into my BED each night *A PAIR SET FOR PARADISE* : AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours Love Struck ~ ANGELA ~ XOXOX
No, not the last, for then the others would not have happened or lasted.
On your journey you will find out the real truth and hopefully it will be the one that brings the glories of love to you.
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