Poetic Dan

Tomorrow, today and always



If I were to leave here tomorrow
My words would still be here today

 

Tears may fall but they will stop
Like every bubble it has to pop

 

Endlessly enjoyed each one brought
Until this one journey came up short

 

A lesson to be more translucent
Not to combust loves illusions

 

You can lose many things along the way
Just never give up on what you say

 

Find your ground by going your way
It will lead to paths others don't play

 

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Keep going your way Dan, your life will be wonderful.

    • Poetic Dan

      That it is and has been but I'm never afraid to show my teeth, while I still have them that is lol

      Always appreciated my friend

      • Poetic Dan

        Or I'll use the dogs ;)

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      • orchidee

        Good write Dan. You got those teeth still?!

        • Poetic Dan

          Half of the original set but I'm sure fulse ones will work fine too!

          Always appreciated

        • Neville

          This has a great vibe and I really like not only the message, but the way you have constructed the poem itself and pinned it to the page......... Nice one Dan.......... Neville

          • Poetic Dan

            Ha, it was written in less than 5 minutes but a life time of emotions.

            Thank you friend, always appreciated

            • Neville

              my pleasure...

            • Fay Slimm

              Ah - what with your excellent turns of phrase and the exciting video I have to save this to my faves dear Dan - a thrilling read.......... and just love those dogs among poppies.

              • Poetic Dan

                And with that honour a smile on my face is placed, funny how easily these words came.

                Always appreciate seeing your name and a fav

              • Suresh

                You are well on your way, no reason to look back, for future is full of promise and so much brighter



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