I Found Myself Thinking of You
I once found myself
Thinking of you
While my father lay dying in another room
The more
I dwell on such things
I realise that more than just a fragment of me
Died there too
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Neville (
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We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
these words were some of the hardest ever to write, at least they were for me... and I can not adequately explain how grateful I am that you my friend.. and perhaps others too might be able to relate... Neville
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
Bless you my friend, thank you for considering these words and the genuine empathy you share...
Neville
My pleasure!
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
thank you orchidee.. and your singing never even crossed my mind..
Neville
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
Yes indeed, I'm sure he is... and thank you GF60..
Neville
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
You are far too kind again.... I am delighted to say..... thank you Seren...
Neville
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
Thank you Suresh... your visit here is much appreciated.
Neville
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